Congratulations @Iron Sky
I strongly agree with the overall judgment, even if I don't agree with some of the reasoning. In my opinion, Iron Sky made extremely good use of most of the ingredients, though the formatting deserves revision. His adventure's flexibility also gave him a well-deserved edge. I don't usually write anything stronger than five-room dungeons (I rely tremendously on improvisation), so most of the feedback here is extremely useful for me in terms of designing written adventures rather than writing settings and hastily adjusting on the fly to player action.