Tirlanolir/D'nemy's Tales of Turgos: The Heroes of Goldfire Glen (UPDATE 7/26)

Chapter 24: Brightstone Keep

Thanks Haven! The characters are all coming into their own at this point. But there's more PC smackdown on the horizon for our poor heroes!

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From my first meeting with Duke Devonhilt I had no doubts he was good man. He has the best interests of his people at heart and wears the mantle of Duke as a facade to appease the nobility. Adept with both commoner and aristocrat, Devonhilt has many allies and holds great sway over a vast area.

"I must admit that I am at a loss for words to express how overwhelmed I am at the mere thought of how miraculous this event truly is." The Duke quietly spoke after a long pause.

Lilian, Gabriel, Talon and myself had told him of the story of Shale's return and metamorphosis into Shallahai. Shallahai had remained silent throughout the tale.

"And your vision," He continued, looking at Shallahai, "I fear it is a vision of the past bound to repeat itself."

Talon nodded his head. "We thought as much."

"Malfoy is raising an army as we speak. He has sent out notices and has called for every soldier in the realm to report to Soliel for training. He intends to claim the Wildlands." The Duke announced.

"For what purpose?" I inquired, puzzled and worried.

"Why not?" The Duke responded. "The events at Goldfire Glen involving the goblins and the Orcus cultists gave him just the excuse he needed to raise such an army. Of course his stated purpose is to remove the threat of the humanoids in the Wildlands. But what he really wants is to obtain more land for the Kingdom of Turgos. And no doubt the Curia is supporting this decision, because what it really wants is to purge the “pagans” from the Wildlands and spread Canaanism to all." The Duke's voice got a little louder as he spoke of these things. It was obvious that he did not agree with Malfoy's motives.

"But more importantly, the Curia wants to purge Turgos of Orcus's influence at Rappan'Athuk and it knows that another assault like the one in Shallahai's vision, the one that happened 15 years ago, would be terribly unpopular." The Duke's disgust was apparent.

"Both his supporters--the landed elite--and the Curia want Malfoy to invade the Wildlands. Acceding to their wishes would make Malfoy extremely popular with these two powerful and influential groups. Malfoy knows that he governs Turgos only until the King is of suitable age to reign. Malfoy seeks to horde influence so that he will remain a powerful man after King Reynard the Younger takes control of the throne. That, my friends, is why Malfoy is raising an army to invade the Wildlands." Devonhilt finished his passionate rant against the nobility and church of Turgos matter-of-factly.

Talon and I had heard some of this before when we were in Auros on our way to Soliel to request Lilian be returned to us. The others were stunned.

"Malfoy will not succeed." Shallahai sneered.

"It takes much more than anger and conviction to stop an army,
Shallahai." Talon calmly replied.

I agreed with both of them.

"What can be done?" I asked the Duke.

"Little more than delay, I’m afraid. Perhaps with enough delay the fervor will die down, the events in Goldfire Glen will be forgotten or maybe something else will happen that will catch the kingdom's attention." The Duke offered.

A deep voice spoke from behind us as we heard the sound of soft leather boots padding across the chamber floor and a quiet swish of a robe following each step.

"Kharas'Vhoories."

We turned to look at the source of the voice.

It was Allustan.

“Kharas’Vhoories will provide the distraction.” The mage said with great authority. “It was what this Veshra was trying to do, was it not? Bring back Kharas’Vhoories? And she is still free. It is only logical that she will continue to attempt to bring her master back into Turgos until she is permanently stopped.”

Allustan came around the table and stopped at the Duke. Devonhilt clapped Allustan on the arm and smiled.

“Have a seat.” He motioned to the empty chair beside him. “Everyone, this is Allustan of Diamond Lake, an Arcanist of some reknown, and one of my trusted advisors. Allustan, this is everyone.” The Duke waved his hand across the table indicated to we assembled there.

“Oh yes. I know of this bunch.” The Arcanist smiled politely nodding to us as he took his seat at the table.

“Surely you don’t suggest that Kharas’Vhoories will return, do you?” I asked.

“Well it does at this time seem to be the most likely candidate. But I speak only of possibilities, Priest of Canaan. I have no greater knowledge on the subject than you.” Allustan responded.

But I sensed that he was indeed holding something back, and I sensed fear. I decided to let it go and change the subject.

“Well, I think delay is a good option. Perhaps, this fervor will die down in the coming months.” I said, ending the matter.

“Lord, we came here to Auros to warn you of a humanoid invasion of Brightstone Keep but a week’s journey from Auros on the edge of the Wildlands.” I continued.

Allustan raised an eyebrow.

“Brightstone Keep” the Duke mused. “I know it well. It guarded the old silver mines in the hillside out there in years past. In recent times, we’ve maintained only a small unit of warriors at Brightstone. The silver mines were abandoned decades ago.” He continued.

“Well your warriors have likely been killed, my Lord.” I continued.

“I can’t spare any warriors. With Malfoy’s orders, I’ve had to disperse most of my standing army, sending them to their homes to avoid conscription.” The Duke was clearly distraught.

“Perhaps, My Lord, you could offer The Heroes of Goldfire Glen something in exchange for purging Brightstone Keep.” Allustan advised Devonhilt.

“Yes, but the keep would need to be manned, Allustan.” The Duke protested.

“And the Heroes seem to be well-equipped to handle such a task.” Allustan countered.

“You’re right, Allustan. That’s an excellent idea.” The Duke turned to Lilian.

“Lady Lilian, if you and your friends would investigate the trouble at Brightstone Keep, purge it of the humanoids infesting it, return any captives to their homes and man the Keep, I will deed Brightstone Keep to you.” The Duke proclaimed.

We were speechless.

After a moment, Lilian responded. “I accept this task and its associated boon, provided it does not interfere with my calling.”

“Spoken like a true champion.” The Duke smiled. “Good. I think that solves this most recent crisis. Report back to me your progress.”

“There is one other matter about which I wish to speak with the Heroes of Goldfire Glen.” Allustan added. “Last time you were here,” He looked to me and Talon, “I mentioned that I had a task for you. Do you remember?” Allustan asked.

“Yes.” I said. Talon nodded.

“Good. As you know I am an Arcanist. My special interest lies in the eternal struggle between Law and Chaos and an ancient civilization known as the Wind Dukes of Aaqa. I believe a tomb of one of the greatest Wind Duke generals exists near Brightstone Keep. While my interest in such a find is without words to describe, I fear that others have an interest in it as well. I would task you to search the environs of Brightstone Keep for the tomb of this general and bring back any artifacts you find within it before others find it.” Allustan concluded.

I must admit that learning of an ancient civilization was intriguing, but measured against the importance of recent events, this seemed unimportant.

“Please forgive my ignorance, Allustan. But such a task seems, while having great potential to advance scholarly pursuits, quite low in priority.” I risked angering the Arcanist.

“It would.” Allustan responded. “But you must trust me on this. I have a hunch that needs to be confirmed. A hunch that could impact recent events or our response to them.” He finished.

“We will do what we can, Allustan.” Lilian responded for the rest of us.

We continued talking into the evening and retired for bed later that night. The Duke promised to have his High Priest, Shammas MacTinder, look at Gabriel’s leg in the morning to see whether he could do anything for it. We said our goodnights.

In the morning, Bishop MacTinder looked at Gabriel’s leg.

“No. Sorry, my son. Only an Archbishop or the Voice and Will can do anything for that.” He responded, his fat red checks and red nose bunched up in a smile.

After our visit with MacTinder, we provisioned up and rode to Brightstone Keep. The journey was uneventful. But when we arrived, we learned just how overrun the Keep had become.

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Years ago, Brightstone Keep was used as a guard post for the Silver Mines that began just inside the hillside outside of which Brightstone Keep stood on a small precipice up a steep cliff from the land below. Its five guard towers and thick stone walls complete with crenellated battlements proved a formidable defense against would-be bandits. A long steep and narrow stone incline provided the only access from the surface below the cliff walls supporting the Keep to the precipice on which the Keep stood, allowing archers manning the battlements to fire several rounds of arrows at an invading humanoid or bandit army before such foes could even approach the Keep itself.

The precipice ended at another cliff wall that rose another one hundred feet to an additional precipice and above that was only the steep sides of hills and low mountains, perhaps negotiable for a well-trained scout, but impassable for a large army. Situated thusly, Brightstone Keep was in a very defensible position.

Several decades ago, the Silver Mines were abandoned. Rumor had it that they had become haunted. An eerie voice could be heard on an ethereal wind running through the mines. Miners started to disappear. That’s when Duke Devonhilt ordered that the mines be closed and only a token force be left to man the battlements at Brightstone Keep.

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Lucky for us, Orcs sleep during the day, for it was daytime when we climbed the narrow incline to Brightstone Keep’s precipice. Talon scouted ahead and reported back to us.

“It looks like some humanoids are walking along the battlements. Very few, perhaps three of them. They don’t appear to be paying any heed to the approach way. And several huge holes have been made in the walls themselves.” He reported.

Talon indicated that we should follow him. When we arrived at the top of the precipice, Talon indicated to the open portcullis about 10 yards away that provided ingress to and egress from the central courtyard of Brightstone Keep. It was closed.

We approached warily, not wanting to attract the attention of the lax Orcs on patrol.

Lilian arrived first and noticing a winch inside the portcullis next to a sleeping Orc, she indicated to it and motioned for the rest of us to stop. Shallahai put his hand on her shoulder and, through a series of gestures, indicated to the others to ready their ranged weapons to attack the Orc on his command.

Stepping up to the portcullis, He spoke in a soft, verdant voice:

Undeniable, unyielding stone, I beseech thee
Release your eternal hold
Run like your sister, in rivulets and gorges
Around these iron bars now mold.

At that moment, the air became much brighter and the stone began to seep around the metal bars, releasing the portcullis from its moorings. It began to fall forward toward Shallahai, making a terrible screeching noise.

Gabriel rushed up and kept the portcullis from falling to the ground by holding it above his head.

The Orc stirred. Just then, shouts rang out from above us on the battlements. So much for stealth.

Lilian engaged the awakened Orc as he stood, cutting it down. She entered the tunnel that lead to the courtyard.

Javelins rained down on us, but at this angle, the Orcs couldn’t manage to score a hit. I called on the power of Canaan to bless us in this battle.

Gabriel threw down the portcullis and together with Talon, began throwing the javelins back at the Orcs.

The air around Shallahai thickened as he intoned a spell:

Root in earth,
give skin girth,
nature’s mark,
thick as bark!

The druid’s skin turned brown and appeared to thicken into a bark-like substance.

As Lilian entered the courtyard, five Orcs entered the tunnel through a side door. They engaged Talon and I, blocking off Lilian from the rest of us.

That’s when Lilian called for help. “Giants!” She called out.

Gabriel stopped throwing javelins at the Orcs and ran down the length of the keep’s wall to an area of crumbled stone where the wall had been breached. I followed quickly after as did Shallahai. Talon continued to the battle the Orcs harrowing him in the tunnel leading to the courtyard.

On climbing through the breach, I saw what Lilian had referred to as giants. They were humanoids, perhaps nine or ten feet tall with green thick skin and long, carrot-like noses, with black claws and hunched backs. There were two of them. Each wore a ring and wielded a giant spiked club.

Just as I saw them, one of them hit Lilian square in the chest with its giant club. It made a crunching sound as it impacted with Lilian’s armor. She was clearly injured. As the creature dislodged its club from Lilian’s armor, blood spurted out of the holes it had made in her armor.

Gabriel engaged the other creature. As he closed, using its superior reach, the creature slammed its club into Gabriel’s side, injuring him badly.

I prayed to Canaan to grant me a weapon with which to fight these foes. Canaan’s holy blade appeared next to the creature harrying Lilian; it was a longsword, a spiritual weapon sheathed in white fire. The blade bit deep into the creature, distracting it while Lilian called for aid.

“Damian! Come to my aid!” She called out.

Shallahai whispered:

“Gift of Nature
burning bright,
ball of flame,
elemental might!”

And a small ball of flame appeared in his hand. He threw it at the creature attacking Lilian. His aim was true, but the fire did not appear to harm the creature.

Gabriel managed to punch the other creature several times to little effect, trying to merely get its attention so it stayed away from his sister.

Damian arrived, erupting out of a circle of golden light that flashed to the right of Canaan’s Champion. Lilian mounted him and rode off toward the tunnel. The creature attacking the paladin swiped at her and missed. As she rode away, the creature lumbered after her.

Canaan’s spiritual weapon continued to slash at the giant creature.

Back in the tunnel, Talon was having some success at besting the Orcs, but his progress was slow.

Shallahai focused his concentration and cawed, seeming to call out to something.

Gabriel was taking a brutal beating from the other creature, while the remaining Orcs on the battlements continued to barrage us with javelins, albeit ineffectively.

Gabriel was in bad shape. I called on Canaan to grant me sanctuary as I ran out to Gabriel in hopes of aiding him.

Seconds later, answering Shallahai’s call, three giant eagles soared in the sky above the creature attacking Gabriel and began to dive at it.

I heard a low hum coming from Shallahai over by the breach in the wall. He was calling more of nature’s creatures to aid us.

The creature chasing Lilian could not fit into the tunnel, but Lilian and Damien were free to attack it from inside the tunnel.

“Canaan, grant me your shield!” Lilian called out, while Damien pummeled the creature with its hooves and bite. And Canaan’s spiritual weapon bit deep into its back. A white glow pulsed in front of Canaan’s champion in the form of a divine shield and faded into her, bolstering her defense against her massive foe.

Gabriel swung at the other creature and missed as it swung again at Gabriel, connecting with its giant spiked club. Just as I arrived at Gabriel’s side, he collapsed, unconscious.

That’s when the thoqqua arrived, called by Shallahai, to waylay the beast. I used the opportunity created by the joint attacks of the giant eagles and the thoqqua to heal Gabriel with Canaan’s grace.

The brawler-turned-priest’s eyes opened and he got up as the thoqqua bull rushed the creature into the giant eagles’ attack path. The eagles raked the creature to little effect. But this tactic gave Gabriel and I time to get up.

Seeing us, the giant again swung out at Gabriel, again knocking him out.

Just then, Lilian, Damien and Canaan’s spiritual weapon managed to fell the other creature and Talon managed to finish the Orcs that had been blocking the entrance into the tunnel from outside the keep.

Lilian rode Damien over the fallen creature into the courtyard to engage the other giant, when I saw the unconscious creature stir and begin to rise, its wounds closing fast.

“Look out, Lilian!” I yelled.

But it was too late. Lilian turned just as the creature took a swing at her with its club, badly wounding her. She spurred Damien on toward us in the center of the courtyard.

“We must flee!” She yelled. “Place Gabriel on Damien!” She galloped in front us, putting her and Damien between us and the creature that had been attacking us. The other creature was lumbering over toward us.

But Talon was right behind it, kicking and punching it with all of his martial skills. Talon’s tactic worked. The creature was distracted and focused on Talon. The monk’s intense studying of martial techniques made it quite difficult for the lumbering giant humanoid to land a blow on him.

I managed to get Gabriel up on Damien’s saddle as Lilian, the giant eagles and the thoqqua continued to attack the other creature.

“Go Now! Retreat!” Lilian commanded me as she took another hit from the creature she was protecting me from.

I ran.

Lilian called on Canaan’s healing grace to heal her wounds and spurred Damien on.

Shallahai had already run out of the courtyard back through the breach.

Lilian grabbed me as Damien galloped by and jumped the breach, with Gabriel’s unconscious form on his back.

We escaped at top speed, running until we were exhausted.

Some time later when we were able to rest I healed Gabriel’s wounds and we spoke about our harried encounter.

“What were those creatures?” Lilian asked to nobody in particular.

“I do not know.” Shallahai responded. “But they were not giants. They were clearly humanoids of some sort.”

“We need help.” I said. I didn’t want to say what I was thinking. I suppose I just didn’t want to believe it. But I had no choice.

“We need Hu Li.” I couldn’t believe I said it.

The others nodded, in silent, if reluctant agreement. Talon merely looked at me.

“Perhaps Balian can tell us what those creatures are so we can better prepare ourselves against them.” Lilian added.

“I think they are immune to fire.” Shallahai added.

That evening I prayed to Canaan that I had suggested the wise course of action. Hu Li is as dangerous as he is helpful. And I still hadn’t forgiven him for what he did to the others in Harpy Ruins.

In the morning, we traveled to Balian’s tower to obtain information and collect Hu Li.
 
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Chapter 25: Brightstone Keep, Redux

Thanks for the continued support Biscuit. And wait NO longer for Hu Li antics!!!

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The ducks at Balian’s tower were more ornery than the last time we were there. One of them waddled right up to Talon and bit him in the side. Luckily there was no impediment to entrance, minimizing our exposure to the angry birds. The drawbridge was down. Hu Li stood at the other side, grinning broadly.

I recalled in that moment just how much I loathed that supercilious smile.

“Foul creatures, aren’t they.” He said as we crossed the drawbridge and approached him. I could not discern from his inflection whether his statement was insult, compliment, joke or merely an observation.

“Lilian!” Hu Li continued, his arms suddenly up and outstretched. “The most comely female specimen in the entire Kingdom! Hello, my dear. It has been too long!”

Hu Li’s toothy grin grew as he prepared to hug the approaching champion.

In a fashion most appropriate, Lilian greeted the ostentatious Hu Li. “It has been too long for good friends to be apart.” She politely said, allowing herself to be embraced by the wizard.

In the middle of their embrace, Hu Li smugly glanced over Lilian’s shoulder to the rest of us, then his face suddenly twisted with repulsion.

“Gah!” He recoiled. “What in the bowels of the Eyeless Hollow Ones is THAT!” He nearly screamed, pointing right at Shallahai.

Expressionless, Shallahai advanced on the wizard until he was nearly on top of him. “You are a waste of water, Jordan!” Shallahai suddenly seethed, eyes glowing white.

“That’s the Acolyte Hu Li!” Hu Li retorted with somewhat less forcefulness than usual as the wizard recoiled in fear from the menacing druid.

Shallahai had never spoken to us about his feelings on Hu Li after the incident with the bead of force. Clearly, Shale had not forgiven the wizard for the foolishness that cost him his life, and those emotions still lingered.

Hu Li looked around at the rest of us, then back to Shallahai. “Shale?” He asked, an octave too high.

“Shale is no more, because of you, fool! I am Shallahai. I am Her answer to the wicked deeds of man and fiend. And you will find me much less tolerant of your idiocy than was Shale.” Shallahai answered.

Hu Li shrank back a little, but he was clearly puzzled.

I put a hand on each of their shoulders. “Shallahai is Shale reincarnated by the power of The Green through Master Baern of the Wiltangle Forest.”

“Oh.” Hu Li responded. Then he looked at my hand on his shoulder with disgust. “You’re touching me again, priest.” He said in an irritated voice.

Praying to Canaan for patience, I lifted my hand from the wizard’s shoulder, resisted the urge to cup it into a fist and allowed it to fall at my side.

Gabriel, however, succumbing to his old ill temper, struck Hu Li clean in the face.

“Ow!” Hu Li cradled his bleeding nose. “What in the Hells was that for?” He whined.

“Oh please, Jordan! Don’t feign ignorance. Aesendal is dead. Shale died. We nearly died trying to return Shale to us. We return and you greet us as though nothing happened? You make jokes and smug remarks without ever once saying, ‘I’m sorry?!’ While you were here comfortable in your tower with your insane master, we risked life and limb!” Gabriel spat.

Hu Li took it all in and looked down at Gabriel’s wooden leg, arching an eyebrow.

Full of hubris, Hu Li retorted, “And somewhat unsuccessfully, I see. And how dare any of you blame me? Talon is the master of tactics, not I! It was by his blunderings that we found ourselves beset as we did. Caged in by our enemies… "

“APPRENTICE!” Came the shrill voice from inside the tower. “QUIT DALLYING OUT THERE WITH THE DUCKS, I AM IN SORE NEED OF YOUR TONGUE. QUICKLY!”

Hu Li sighed heavily. The proud façade gone, and shoulders suddenly slumped. “You think you know what I have endured?” He responded to Gabriel in a strangely lucid, if tired, voice. “You don’t know the half of it.” Hu Li turned away and walked inside.

We followed.

* * * *

Helena was visiting with Balian when we arrived in the study. She was as unnervingly beautiful and alluring as ever.

“Oh look, Balian. It’s Evora and crew!” She purred.

“Hello.” Balian said in his characteristically shrill voice while adjusting his backless robe. Eight scabrous, oozing sores covered his back, slowly bleeding a black fluid that smelled vaguely of vinegar and soiled feet.

It was disgusting.

Orolde was dabbing one of them with a beige sponge dripping with some milky fluid. Hu Li entered the room just before us and immediately went over to his master, knelt down and assisted him in adjusting his robe to expose the eight sores.

“Nancy is particularly in need of your special ministrations, Apprentice.” Balian cooed.

“Yes master.” Hu Li responded as he began to lick the black ichor from one of the sores on the lower right of Balian’s back.

“Ahhhh.” Breathed Balian. “Excellent. That’s good, Apprentice. That’s good.”

Helena looked away from that vile scene and over to us, her expression going from revilement to a pleasant smile.

“It’s a pity that Veshra got away. But don’t despair. I’ve been doing some inquiring. I think I’m close to finding out who released her.” She started.

“That’s great news, Lady Helena.” I responded enthusiastically. “You will let us know as soon as you know?” I asked.

“Most certainly, I will.” She responded. Then she seemed to look at Shallahai for the first time.

“What in the planes are you?” she asked, rising from her chaise lounge to inspect Shallahai, intrigued.

“This is Shallahai. Shale reincarnated and evolved by the hand of The Green.” I responded.

“Fascinating.” She responded, preoccupied with Shallahai. “What interesting skin.” She whispered.

“Are there more of you?” She asked Shallahai.

“None that I am aware of, Lady Helena.” Shallahai responded.

“Hmm.” She put her hands on her voluptuous hips satisfied and turned to the rest of us. “So, what does bring you here today?”

“We were at Brightstone Keep, which has been overrun by humanoids, Orcs and some giant hunchbacked green monsters with black claws and long warty noses. We nearly didn’t survive. The green giants kept regenerating and wouldn’t die. We had hoped to obtain some guidance from Balian as to what they are and we came to collect Hu Li to help us defeat them.” I responded.

“Bah! Hu Li?” Came Balian’s shrill voice.

“Yes Master?” Hu Li stopped licking to respond.

“Not you. Keep licking, Apprentice or it will be the Tentacle Room for you!” Balian spat.

“Yes Master.” Hu Li quickly replied and renewed his licking with vigor.

Turning his attention back to us, he continued. “Help you? Like he helped you defeat the Priest of Orcus and his minions?” Hu Li is an incompetent boob!” Balian nearly shrieked.

Hu Li paused his licking to whine, “Master, please!” He quickly resumed his ghastly tongue ministrations on Balian’s sores.

“Quiet, Boy!” Balian retorted.

“But it wasn’t my fault.” Hu Li whined.

“Not your fault?! Who told you, ‘don’t throw the bead into the room when your friends are in it,’ hmm?!” Balian scolded Hu Li.

“But Master, I forgot!” Hu Li whined.

“Oh for the love of Xuityuliifor! To the Tentacle Room with you!” Balian commanded Hu Li.

“Yes Master.” Hu Li responded, despondently, slowly getting up and walking out of the room.

Gabriel was angry with Hu Li. But he was clearly conflicted over how Balian was treating him. Nonetheless, his recent embrace of Canaanism allowed him to hold his tongue.

When Hu Li left, Balian turned his attention to the rest of us. Gabriel’s wooden leg caught his eye. “Your leg’s off, boy.” He said to Gabriel.

“Yes, I know.” Gabriel responded angrily.

“What’d you go and do that for?” Balian asked.

Gabriel looked puzzled.

“Uh Master, It wasn’t his doing. A dire wolf ripped it off of him in Wiltangle Forest.” I said, trying to clear things up.

“How rude.” Balian retorted.

“Yes well, we were wondering if you knew anything that could fix his leg. A spell perhaps? Or a ritual?” I asked.

“Hmm. Let me think about that one.” Balian mused.

“Didn’t you say you were fighting some green giants with hunchbacks and black claws?” Balian asked.

“Yes, Master. We were. At Brightstone Keep.” I replied.

Balian got up and walked over to a wall of bookshelves, perusing the spines for a moment, looking for a particular title. “Ah, there it is.” He said triumphantly as he pulled down a thick dusty volume and placed it on the table.

He opened the book to a picture. “There.” He pointed at the picture. “Is that it?” He asked.

We all gathered around the reading table and looked at the picture. It looked very much like the creatures we fought in the Keep.

“Yes! That’s it!” I cried.

“That’s a Troll.” Balian replied flatly.

“It can only be killed by fire or acid. Otherwise, it will keep regenerating its wounds.” Balian explained.

“These trolls seemed to be immune to fire.” Shallahai said.

“That’s impossible.” Balian discounted Shallahai’s comment with a wave of his hand.

Shallahai merely shrugged.

“Come to think of it, troll blood might be used in a ritual to replenish Gabriel’s leg. I’ll need a lot of it, though. Perhaps a bucket full.” Balian offered.

Helena looked at Balian, perplexed. Changing the subject, she asked, “So what were you doing at Brightstone Keep anyway?”

Talon responded. “The Duke charged us with routing the humanoids that had overtaken it. And Allustan, an Arcanist from Diamond Lake, asked us to look for a lost Tomb to a Wind Duke for some artifacts. Apparently the tomb is near Brightstone Keep.”

“Ah, Allustan.” Helena chuckled. “He’s so obsessed with those Wind Dukes.”

“You know Allustan?” I asked Helena.

“Of course she does, Apprentice. Like you, he was at one time my apprentice. He didn’t stay long, however, finding my brand of arcanism too….complex.” Balian interrupted. "He decided to study with Manzorian at Mage Point in the Neutral Territory."

“Oh.” I replied.

Hu Li screamed from the other room.

“What are you doing to him?” Gabriel yelled out.

“He is being disciplined, Priest of Canaan. He is learning the delicate art of concentration.” Balian replied acidly in a voice that could shatter glass. “And I will not have you interfering with his studies.” He added.

Gabriel’s face turned red and he stormed out of the room and out of the tower.

I sighed. Some things never change.

“We would like to take Hu Li with us to assist us in our charge. Will you allow him to come?” Lilian asked.

Balian looked at the champion considering her words.

“Hu Li may have a reprieve from his studies to aid you provided you all agree to come back to me at this tower at a time of my choosing to aid me in a very important task.” Balian replied.

“I will, of course.” Lilian responded. “You have my word.”

“You must all swear it.” Balian continued, looking at all assembled. When he got to Helena, he added, “Except you, of course, my dear.”

Helena smiled and nodded.

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We all swore to do Balian’s bidding and left the next morning with Hu Li and a severely bruised Gabriel in tow.

“What happened to you?” Hu Li asked the bruised Gabriel as the wizard limped along.

“I was accosted by angry ducks all night.” Gabriel responded. “What’s a matter with you? Why are you limping?”

“You wouldn’t understand.” Hu Li responded.

Fearing a repeat of the argument we endured last time we were at Balian’s tower, I quickly changed the subject. “Hu Li, I have something for you.” I said, withdrawing a long ebony wand from my pack. I obtained it from the werewolves’ den in the Wiltangle Forest.

“Oh, that’s so pretty!” Hu Li nearly giggled. “What does it do?” He asked.

“I don’t know. You’ll have to figure that out.” I replied.

“Hmm, perhaps tomorrow.” Hu Li said. “I suppose you’re not all bad, priest.” He added after a moment.

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On the morning of the day we were to reach Brightstone Keep, I awoke early for my usual prayers. When I asked of Canaan to bless me with my usual access to His Domain of Mysticism, I felt a warmth at my chest that jarred me from my meditations.

My holy symbol was glowing white. When I touched it, it was warm, and growing warmer by the moment. A cloud broke overhead and a thin ray of sun rained down on me.

The divine spell spiritual weapon was at that moment replaced with the normally druidic power to heat metal. I accepted the gift with all humility and thanked Canaan for His continued blessings.*

By the time we arrived back at Brightstone Keep, it had been a full week since our last visit. We noticed with some trepidation that the portcullis had been returned to its original position as though Shallahai’s spell had never been cast. Clearly, there was a spell caster among them.

Luckily the portcullis was up this time. We decided that Talon would sneak in first and immobilize the Orc guards in the towers while the rest of us battled the trolls. None of the Orcs seemed to be manning the battlements. Perhaps we killed enough of them last time that they had too few to watch during the day and since the trolls scared us off, they probably assumed nobody would be back.

I was the first one into the courtyard, followed quickly by Lilian on Damien. Shallahai and Hu Li remained outside the keep, standing on the rubble at one of the huge gaping holes in the keep’s walls. Gabriel followed close behind Lilian and me. Aside from two large wooden buildings with doors like barns, an empty stable area and a well with a chain wrapped around it, nothing was in the courtyard, except the dry, packed earth.

Then we heard some sounds of fighting from one of the towers. Talon had begun.

I heard a chain rattling ahead, as though it was being dragged along the ground. Then a horn blew. The Orcs sounded the alarm!

The doors to one of the barn-like structures slammed open and back against the side of the building. Out lumbered one of the trolls, roaring.

Lilian cried out, “Look! Over by the well!”

I looked to the well and saw the source of the rattling chain. From around the side of one of the buildings near the well, the largest white wolf I had ever seen padded out, growling. It was as big as Damien and was leashed by a thick metal spiked collar connected to a long chain wrapped around the well.

“Canaan, grant me your divine shield!” Lilian called out. A moment later, she was wreathed in His righteousness.

“Canaan, bless these, your loyal servants, as they battle in your name.” I prayed to Canaan to bless us.

Shallahai gasped. “Winter wolf! Get out of there!”

But it was too late.

The wolf breathed on us. It was as cold as a blizzard on a dark winter night. I felt as though my joints had frozen. Frost covered my hair and eyebrows. I could barely stand. I stood there, shivering.

Lilian and Damien fared a bit better, and Gabriel was luckily out of range of the blast.

Lilian spurred Damien forward and drew her blade. As Damien reached the wolf, Lilian sliced down on the wolf’s back, injuring it. The angered wolf bit Lilian in return and drew blood.

Shallahai chanted to produce flame as he did in the previous battle with the trolls. But this time, he hurled a small ball of flame at the winter wolf. The wolf yelped in pain as the flame hit its hide, singeing it.

Shivering, I called out to Canaan to send me his holy spiritual weapon, but in that moment I had forgotten that I had not received it from Him. The sword did not take shape and for a long moment I was flummoxed, until it hit me. I was granted heat metal. I looked to the iron collar winter wolf’s neck.

I thanked Canaan for His foresight and began to chant through blue lips.

Hu Li pointed the ebony wand I had given him the other day at a point in the courtyard between him and us and spoke a word I didn’t understand. A bright light lit the end of his wand and jetted to the point in space he indicated, but divided into three glowing balls, each of which grew into a celestial dog. The summoned monsters appeared and began barking and running toward the lumbering troll.

Meanwhile the doors to the other structure burst open and out lumbered the second troll.

Lilian and the wolf traded wounds. Gabriel ran up behind his sister and whispered a prayer to Canaan to heal his sister. He touched her side as she rode past to once again engage the massive winter wolf. White light flared from his hand and Lilian was rejuvenated.

The first troll was effectively preoccupied by Hu Li’s celestial dogs. The troll’s blows were so potent that the poor creatures could only take one hit before they died. But being summoned creatures, they merely popped out of existence as they died. So the troll batted at them and they “popped.” The first three lasted a mere second. At first the troll was confused, putting his hand to his mouth after “popping” the summoned monsters. He seemed hungry and didn’t seem to understand why his food kept popping like a bubble, depriving him of meat. Then the troll locked eyes with Hu Li, seeming to decide that Hu Li was responsible for the disappearance of his food. The angry troll lumbered after the wizard.

My prayer ended and I felt the fires of the sun bolt like a wave from my hand, warming me and bolstering my courage. The warmth spread from me, massaging the air forming undulating ripples between my fingers and the metal collar about the wolf’s neck. Seconds later, the creature’s neck began to smolder.

Hu Li had to keep expending charges from his wand to keep the troll occupied. Eventually, it was like a game to the troll. I think the creature even giggled as he batted at the dogs and clapped his hands, skipping along toward Hu Li. But the troll keep advancing on Hu Li and when Hu Li realized it, he got scared and ran away from the giant creature, until he was outside the keep. Still summoning the dogs, Hu Li kept moving away from the troll. But the troll kept coming, “popping” the celestial dogs.

Two more times, Shallahai hurled a small ball of flame at the winter wolf and scored hits. Between our combined elemental assault and Lilian’s blade, the winter wolf was cut down, allowing Lilian to turn her attention to the second troll, which had just started beating Gabriel to a pulp.

Lilian called on Canaan to grant a blessing on her weapon. Her sword glowed white for a moment, girded by Canaan’s grace. Gabriel took a moment to heal himself, then attacked the troll with his fists with renewed vigor.

Meanwhile, Shallahai intoned another spell to produce flame. This time, when he hurled his small balls of flame at the troll, they seemed to damage him. I couldn’t tell the trolls apart physically, but I noticed from the stylization of this troll’s ring, that this was not the troll Shallahai had been pummeling with fire last time. That got me thinking about the rings.

Lighting a stick of frankincense, I prayed. “Let the scent of Canaan’s holy smoke reveal that which is enchanted.”

Focusing my concentration for several seconds and breathing in the thick aroma of the incense, I allowed the holy vapor to alter my consciousness such that when I opened my eyes, I would see the world from a higher perspective, differentiating between the mundane and the magical, allowing me to detect magic. There it was. The ring was magical. Later, I would learn that both rings were enchanted and that the ring on the other troll protected the creature from fire, while the ring on this troll had a much more insidious nature.

With me healing Lilian and Gabriel, our combined efforts managed to defeat the troll. Shallahai blasted two more balls of flame into it for good measure. Its wounds seemed to stop knitting.

Hu Li screamed from far away, outside the keep. We exchanged worried glances at each other and went to find him. Lilian and Damien sped out through one of the large gaping holes in the keep’s walls. Gabriel was next, followed by Shallahai and me.

Hu Li was teetering with his back at the edge of the precipice. One celestial dog stood between him and the giant troll. He had no where left to run. Lilian and Damien slammed into the troll from the side, sending the troll off the edge of the precipice to land at its bottom a hundred feet below.

Hu Li dropped to his knees and sobbed.

Gabriel turned around, disgusted.

Lilian dismounted and approached Hu Li, as did Shallahai and I.

“You were very brave.” Lilian said, placing her hand on his shoulder.

“The troll will regenerate if we don’t do something about it.” Shallahai reminded us.

Hu Li wiped the tears away and collected himself. “Yes. Quite.” He replied, rising and turning toward the edge of the precipice.

“Sagitta Acidus” He intoned and pointed as a green glowing acid arrow shot from his index finger into the head of the troll at the bottom of the precipice, melting its face into some unrecognizable goo.

“That should do it.” Hu Li said as he brushed his hands together.

“Where’s Talon?” Gabriel asked, listening for the sounds of fighting.

We all stopped to listen. We were met with only silence.

Fearing the worst, we all ran back inside the keep toward the guard tower Talon had disappeared into.

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*Unbeknownst to Evora's player at this point, Canaan, through Tanner, the Exalted Child, had turned Evora's holy symbol--a Canaanite Cross--into an artifact of sorts. This was the first indication that it was more than it seemed. The holy symbol gave Evora access to the Sun Domain (one of Canaan's many domains) and increased his caster level +2 for all healing spells. As Evora gains levels, the holy symbol exhibits new powers.
 
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What? No reader comments? No WONDER it's taken me soooo long to get the next update going.

Well, expect an update tonight or tomorrow, chock full of Hu Li madness and EVEN a PC death! Can you guess who it will be?
 

Chapter 26: The Union of the Two

I am sorry this took longer than I expected. Friday came and went...

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“Talon!” Gabriel shouted out.

He was met with silence.

Gabriel raced up the stairs in the tower to the trapdoor at its upper landing and bounded through it. The bodies of several orcs lay broken on the flagstone battlements.

There among them was Talon’s battered, unmoving body. The monk had clearly suffered from the rusted javelins the orcs masterfully wielded. His gray robe was soaked with a mixture of his own blood and the blood and gore of the defeated orcs. The broken shaft of a javelin stuck out from his shoulder, the wood stained copper from his blood.

Fearing the worst, Gabriel felt for signs of life. Finding a weak pulse, Gabriel whispered a prayer of thanks to Canaan and cured Talon’s grievous wounds. Talon’s bones and flesh knit before Gabriel’s eyes as the curative power of Canaan coursed through his friend, pushing the javelin through the skin. It clattered onto the flagstone.

Talon’s eyes opened and he gasped for air.

“Welcome back to the living, old friend.” Gabriel said with a smile and a clasp on the shoulder. “Let me help you up.”

“Thank you, Gabriel. I am fine.” Talon said, getting up and waving Gabriel off.

Gabriel smiled and looked around. Bodies of orcs were strewn across the battlements. Gabriel counted them. “12?! You managed to take down 12 of those things?” The astonished Gabriel looked at Talon with new respect.

“Yes.” Talon replied flatly and walked past Gabriel down the stairs of the tower and into the courtyard to join the others.

Hu Li had used the intervening time to collect trollblood into a rusty bedpan. He was making a mess of things, having spilled the bedpan twice and having stepped in it once. Hu Li was covered in blood by the time he was finished collecting a full bedpan’s worth of trollblood.

Emerging from the base of the tower, Talon rejoined us in the courtyard. “Rumors of my death have been greatly exaggerated.” He announced.

“Hmmm. Pity.” Hu Li replied and started to examine the troll he just bled, clearly uninterested in the monk.

“Oh look, a ring.” Hu Li announced, reaching for the ring on the troll’s corpse.

“Yes, Hu Li.” I said exasperated, slowly turning to face Hu Li. “It is enchanted and… tainted. I would advise leaving it alone. It might—"

I stopped mid-sentence as I saw Hu Li had already donned the ring.

“Oh no.” I muttered and buried my face in my hand.

Gabriel came running up. “I think I heard something inside the barn.”

I looked up at Gabriel, worried. Thoughts of Hu Li’s folly instantly fled from my mind at the sound of a potentially new threat. I began walking toward the barn. “Let’s see what new nastiness awaits us. Be on your guard, everyone.”

With Shallahai behind and to the left of me and the bloody Hu Li to the right, I opened the double doors to the shed nearest the well. The sun was behind me, I could tell, as the inhabitants of the shed, all peasants in various states of shock, hopelessness and injury shielded their eyes as I opened the doors.

“Fear not, for Canaan and Shankari are with you my friends. His righteousness has smitten your captors and Her love has set you free.” I said to the motley crew.

Their arms, atrophied as they were, lifted toward the Heavens in relief and thanks. Tears of joy streamed down their muddied cheeks.

“Thank Canaan!” Some shouted.

“Thank the Green!” Shouted others.

We tended to them. Even Hu Li, in a rare show of altruism cast several prestidigitations on the peasants, instantly cleaning off untold days of gunk that covered their emaciated bodies. Shallahai, Gabriel, Lilian and I went immediately to work healing them. I called upon Canaan’s grace to provide the starving innocents with some food and water.

Their bellies full, their clothes cleaned and their wounds healed, the serfs gathered around Shallahai as he told them tales of the Green. I had stepped away from the storytelling to gather my thoughts.

Since I had opened the door on these people, uttering those words “His righteousness has smote your captors and Her love has set you free” I felt something stirring deep within me. It was pure as a newborn; light, innocent, and full of boundless potential, but also fragile, delicate and hungry for love and attention.

I saw the truth. I felt the jagged rift between the Green and Canaanism as if it were a wound in my chest so deep it split my very heart. I witnessed first hand the awesome might and eternal righteousness that sprung from the commingling of the two faiths.

For, I realized, my whole being full of boundless joy and hope, the two faiths were in fact One. They were a Union of two, crying out to be rejoined. The Male and the Female. The Spirit and the Flesh. That which is and that which loves.

The Green was the physical, that which could be touched, seen, smelled, tasted, while Canaan was the heart, the soul, the spirit. The softness of wool. The soothing fragrance of lavender. The awe in a sunrise over a mountaintop. The sweetness of grapes.

Sensation is the Green. The feelings those sensations beget are Canaan.

One cannot exist without the other.

This was my calling. Though a great weight lifted from me, I felt the yoke of urgency pulling me forward to destiny.

I was to rejoin that which was torn asunder. To rebuild what was lost and heal the one true faith of Turgos.

I knew this would brand me a heretic in the eyes of mortals, but I did not fear. Canaan and the Green were with me.

I retired from Shallahai’s storytelling to a narrow, quiet lip that jutted from the cliff outside the walls of Brightstone Keep.

Looking toward the star-sprinkled midnight sky, I began formulating the edicts of this new ministry and means by which I would spread the Good News.

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I must have fallen asleep there. As dawn came, I awoke and made my daily prayers to Canaan. As I was finishing, I heard the soft padding of feet. Opening my eyes, I saw a little girl of perhaps ten years. She wore a simple yellow dress. Her brown locks were tied up into pigtails and bound in grass. She was barefoot.

“Good morning, Father.” She greeted me in her soft little voice with wide eyes and a smile.

“Well, good morning to you, too, little one.” I responded with a smile.

She sat down on the dirt in front of where I was meditating, mimicking my style of sitting. “I’m Hanna” she said after a second. She was playing with something in her hands.

“I’m Evora.” I replied. “What do you have there, Hanna?” I asked.

“It’s a gift for you.” She replied. I made it last night when the forest spirit was speaking to us. Mommy told me that I should make you something to show you and Canaan our thanks and respect for saving us.” She added innocently as she held out the gift.

It was a Canaanite cross whittled from two small sticks, bound together with grass and interwoven with ivy vine and holly. It was simple and beautiful. It was the perfect symbol to represent the union of the two faiths. I looked at Hanna. I saw only youth and innocence. Such a thing, such a beautiful thing made from the hands of such a naive creature. This new religion, one that would marry the god and the goddess, was as youthful and innocent as this little girl. Surely it was no coincidence that she would be the one to conjure the symbol of this new religion.

Taking the cross in my hand and examining it, I said, “This is a truly remarkable gift, Hanna. I will never forget your kindness. I will keep it with me always, next to my heart. Thank you.” I told her.

She blushed.

“Do you follow Canaan or The Green?” I asked.

“Our family follows The Green. But we go to church whenever the Priest of Canaan is in our area. Mommy says we have to go so we don’t get in trouble. Why would we get in trouble if we didn’t go to church, Evora?” She asked.

I tried to mask my incredulity. I suppose I shouldn’t have been shocked. But I had never known what the followers of The Green underwent to stay free. What persecution they endure! I felt nauseous that I had belonged to an institution that would so repress a person’s spirit that she could not even have the freedom to worship whom she chose.

“I don’t know.” I lied. I knew why. It was so that the Curia could maintain power and influence. But this little girl would not understand that. And this little girl would not understand my disagreement with that approach.

“It will not be like that forever, however. Trust me.” I added.

Looking again at the cross she made for me, I asked, “What do you call a marriage in the ancient language?”

“I don’t know.” Hanna responded. “I don’t know the ancient language.”

“Hanna!” I heard a woman call. We turned to see a woman in a long brown skirt and white blouse waving to Hanna.

“Is that your mommy?” I asked Hanna.

“Uh-huh.” She responded. “I have to go now.” She said sadly.

“Well, you don’t want to disobey your mommy.” I said.

Hanna got up and hugged me. “Bye.” She said.

“Bye, Hanna.” I said. “Thank you.”

As Hanna ran back toward the keep and her waiting mom, my thoughts once again turned toward the possibilities of purging the Curia from this land and bringing true enlightenment to the citizens of Turgos.

Why do you come here, Heretic? There was a voice in my head. It was familiar somehow. I looked around. It was so invasive and disturbing, like pinpricks in my brain.

Did you come to spread your seed in all the little boys and girls? There it was again. What was it? It was clearly female and foul.

Or did you just come here to renounce the Great Thief? By Canaan, what is she talking about? I was frantically looking around for the source of this voice. She must be near. But I saw nothing.

“Show yourself!” I yelled out. But I was met with silence.

“Show yourself, witch!” I repeated. My call was met with disturbing laughter, laughter that my mind, not my ears, heard.

I got up and ran toward the keep.

I found the others gathered around the well. Winded, I approached Lilian.

“We have to get these people out of here. They are not safe here.” I said through ragged breaths.

“What do you mean?” Lilian asked, puzzled. “What’s going on?”

“Someone else is here, Lilian. Something sinister.” I responded. “It may be Veshra.”

“I feel it, too. There is something in the mine. The captives told me they were slaves to something called the Kurjan, a great Orc Shaman. He had a human woman helping him. Apparently the woman used her magic to enchant these people to come here in the first place, where they were made slaves to work the mines. But they weren’t mining silver. They were excavating, looking for something. The next shift is due to return to the mines in a couple of hours. They will be missed.” Lilian explained.

“Then we have to get these people out of here, Lilian. Now!” I repeated with urgency.

“I know. We are attempting to discover what has tainted the water in this well, to remove its influence from the water so that you can purify it and the people can fill their waterskins for the journey home. Shallahai is in the well now.

“I found it.” Came a hollow sounding voice from the well. It was Shallahai. I peered over the edge of the well.

Shallahai was holding up a burlap sack.

“A brick was out of the well. It was letting dirt into the well water. I replaced it and mended the breach. This sack was also letting out blood into the water.” Shallahai continued as he climbed out of the well and through the sack to the ground.

I stepped over to the well. The water level was pretty low. “Gabriel, can you lower me to the surface of the water with a rope?” I asked.

“Sure.” He replied. Lilian handed him a rope. He tied it around me and lowered me into the well.

Once at the water’s surface, I whispered a prayer to Canaan to purify water.

In mid-prayer, I heard that voice again. You expect him to grant you miracles when you intend to destroy him, heretic? Through a feat of extreme concentration, I managed to finish the prayer. Canaan’s holy light flashed at my fingertip as it touched the surface of the water. A glow pulsed through the well water for an instant and faded. The prayer worked.

Silence, Infidel! I thought.

I heard commotion at the top of the well. “Evora! Come quickly!” I heard Lilian yell.

Gabriel heaved on the rope. In a matter of seconds I was back at the top of the well, where I saw, to my amazement, Hu Li encased in a solid block of amber.

His mouth was open in surprise. He was holding a box carved with strange alien sigils that seemed to writhe. The burlap sack that Shallahai had brought from the bottom of the well was laying open at his feet. Hu Li was unmoving.

“Foolish wizard!” I cursed. His recklessness was bound to do him in eventually.

“What has happened to him?” Talon asked.

“This is a magical trap created by a spell, called sepia snake sigil.” I replied. “He must have triggered it when he tried to open the box.”

“Can you remove the enchantment?” Shallahai asked.

“Unfortunately, no.” I replied. “I do not have that kind of power.”

You will once you have destroyed the Great Thief. But that’s your plan isn’t it, Heretic? That voice was in my head again.

“We have to get these people out of here, now!” I demanded.

Lilian looked shocked at my outburst.

“Lilian, you must trust me. Something very sinister is in that mine and it knows we are here. It has been baiting me all morning.” I replied urgently.

Lilian nodded, finally grasping the urgency of the situation.

Shallahai and Gabriel lined up the villagers at the well as Gabriel filled their waterskins. I blessed them in the name of Canaan and the Green and sent them on their way. As I came to Hanna in line, she hugged me, “I hope that Canaan and the Green keep you safe. Will you come visit me?” She asked.

“Where to you live, child?” I replied.

She gave me directions to get to her house and I committed them to memory, fully intending to visit her and her family.

Pedophile! Filthy, retched man! It was the voice, again.

I responded in my mind. You are obviously a flawed creature for you cannot perceive my true feelings and desires. You are nothing. I thought.

I will feast on your flesh, priestling! Came the deranged reply.

I whispered a prayer to Canaan to give me the strength of will required for my coming trial.

As the last of the farmers-turned-slaves left the keep, I returned to the others. They were trying to move Hu Li. Gabriel and Talon together could carry him relatively easily.

“What shall we do with him?” Gabriel asked.

“Leave him here for now.” I responded. “He will be no assistance to us in our coming confrontation.”

“How long will he be like this?” Lilian asked.

“Days. Weeks.” I replied. “It depends on the power of the wizard or sorcerer that laid the trap.”

I began walking toward the mine entrance, resolute that whatever Adversarial creature awaited us would die and wither when faced with Canaan’s truth.

I was wrong.

Inside, the mine was dark. Gabriel whispered a prayer and his hand was enveloped in the righteous white fire of Canaan, lighting our way. Lilian walked next to her brother, followed by me and Talon. Shallahai brought up the rear.

Cobwebs and dust covered everything but the well worn path the farmers took to get where they had been lead.

We traveled deeper into the mine.

I warned you, priestling.

It was her voice again.

“Stop!” I cried out. “She is near.”

“Who?” Shallahai asked.

“The creature, the beast in my head.” I replied.

“Your priest has surely gone mad, Lilian, Champion of Canaan.” It was a woman’s voice, audible, ahead of us. A figure emerged from the shadow into view. She was lithe and sensual, naked. Her supple breasts were full as were her ruby lips. Her hair was black as pitch and shone like silk in Gabriel’s light. It was long and straight, its ends teasing her erect nipples. She moved like water, such grace I had never seen before in a human. Though she was not human. Her beauty was marred by two small horns jutting out from her forehead, a long supple tail jutting out from her backside and large furled batlike wings.

“Succubus!” I cried, as I readied my mace.

“Leave here, Heroes. You have no business here. I give you this one warning.” She commanded.

“You are the creature from the jail in Goldfire Glen.” Lilian accused the Succubus.

“Yes, Champion. And I see you still fail to see the error of your ways. While I personally have no affection or reverence for him, Orcus will have your soul, just as he has devoured those of your parents. You are a fool and you run a fool’s errand!” The Succubus leveled her gaze at Lilian as if in challenge.

Gabriel issued a battle cry and charged the Succubus, but she had been expecting such a move. As Gabriel prepared to land a blow on the Succubus, she phased into the ether.

“You have been warned!” She spoke in an ethereal voice, its menace echoing off of the mine walls.

A moan escaped unseen voices down the corridor from us. A moment later, four skeletal creatures dripping flesh shuffled into view. As they got closer, we could see that it was not flesh that dripped from them, but little green worms. They were infested with them.

Fear seized our hearts. These were unnatural abominations! Gabriel succumbed to the horror of these creatures and went screaming back toward the entrance of the mine, out of his mind with fear.

“Fear not, my friends! Canaan is with us!” Lilian commanded as she unsheathed her longsword and prepared to battle the undead. “Canaan! Grant me your shield!” She cried. And a white glow surrounded her in the form of a magnificent tower shield then faded into her, bolstering her for the coming battle with Canaan’s divine shield.

Shallahai chanted:

Goddess, grant your creatures the eternal renewal of your most sacred cycles. Infuse them with nature’s gift of vigor.”

A deep green glow surrounded us for a moment. The air was cleared of dust and we could see clearly, as though the area around us had been cleansed of the taint of age and all was fresh as the first day of Spring.

Even thusly bolstered, I had to fight down the urge to retch in the presence of such evil. I clutched my holy symbol, my Canaanite Cross, the one that Tanner had infused with some sort of divine power. Feeling Canaan’s symbol in my grasp lent me strength. My faith in Canaan is absolute. I presented the symbol to the undead abominations coming at me.

“The Light of Canaan compels you!” I commanded. A bright, blinding light shot out from my holy symbol, flooding the mine with light.

“The Truth of Canaan compels you!” I commanded with greater force, as I took a step toward the lumbering creatures. Angelic voices filled the air, whispering sublime prayers to the Lord of Truth.

The writhing skeletons paused.

“The Power of Canaan compels you!” I commanded at last with righteous fury. The light intensified and the chanting angelic voices became a cacophony of perfect prayer. Both reached a crescendo then suddenly stopped. A split second later three of the four undead burst into sunlight and disintegrated to dust.

The Succubus screamed in frustration from somewhere in the distance.

Lilian and Talon engaged the remaining skeleton. Lilian connected with her blade, but to no avail. Talon managed to punch the creature and narrowly avoided a falling worm.

Then from off in the distance, we heard: “Fleshraker, kill the infidels and bring me their blood!” The Succubus cried out from a place unseen.

Moments later, a creature perhaps ten feet tall resembling a man with talons, claws and a vulture-like head, flew from down the corridor, bullrushing Lilian to the ground. A mass of spores exploded from its body as it did so. They covered Lilian.

Lilian screamed as the spores began to bore into her skin, finding the breaks in her armor.

Shallahai began to chant:

Mistress of the Earth, the Air, the—,” He stopped and started to convulse uncontrollably.

Talon finished off the skeleton, unleashing a flurry of blows on it. The bones crumbled under his relentless blows.

Lilian swung her blade at the new creature, biting into its flesh. Black ichor oozed out of the wound she opened in its arm. It let out a piercing screech as gray needle thin spores exploded from its flesh and bore through Lilian’s armor and into her flesh.

I looked to Shallahai in confusion as he convulsed, then back at the birdman. Something was familiar about this creature. I wracked my memory to think of it even as I whispered a prayer to Canaan. "Canaan, grant us your divine light so that we may see clearly!" My mace was suddenly engulfed in light, purging the near darkness that was quickly descending as Gabriel fled further out of the mine.

The creature unleashed the full fury of its attacks on Lilian, opening wounds on her arms and chest. She screamed as the bird creature’s spores dug deeper into her skin. She was in bad shape. Lilian again swung at the creature and missed, considerably weakened from the beating she had just taken.

“Vrock!” I cried, suddenly realizing what this creature was. “It is a demon! One of the Adversary’s chosen! Run!” I cried.

But it was too late. Talon lunged at the creature, locking it in a hold, trying to grapple it to the ground.

That was a mistake. Instead of trying to escape Talon’s hold, the creature took the opportunity to shred Talon with its vicious claws. To the Vrock’s natural weapons, Talon was like paper. Blood sprayed across the walls of the mine as Talon was eviscerated in one terrible series of rakings. What little was left of his corpse went limp.

Shallahai suddenly stopped convulsing as Yuindr flew into his hands. The blade glowed green and Shallahai’s eyes glowed to match. Shallahai charged the Vrock Demon.

It was as Master Baern had warned. The blade must have been vying with Shallahai’s will until Shallahai succombed to its domination.

She will have your water, fiend!” Shallahai cried as he thrust Yuindr into the Vrock Demon. A pulse of green entered the Vrock from Yuindr and the demon’s flesh began to sink into itself as it was drained of all of its bodily fluids. A horrid wilting. Shallahai withdrew Yuindr and the dessicated husk of the Vrock collapsed onto the mine floor.

Shallahai convulsed a second time and Yuindr clanged onto the ground.

“Run!” I yelled. “Before the Succubus returns.”

Shallahai shook his head clear and picked up Yuindr. Lilian picked up Talon’s corpse. And I grabbed Talon’s pack. We all ran out of the mine to find a whimpering Gabriel crouching next to the block of amber that contained Hu Li.

Lilian screamed as the spores burrowed deeper. She fell, unconscious.
 
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iStrider said:
When is the next update? I am eager for more!

What he said.

Canaan, I somehow managed to miss the last update (must have been posted when I was on my hols). It's great stuff. Please don't keep us waiting too long for another instalment.
 

Chapter 27: Talon Half-Faean

Thanks for the continued support! Real life kept me busy this last month, but I managed to squeak out an update for you!

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There was barely a table scraps’ worth of energy left in me. We had traveled far and with little rest. By the grace of Canaan I was able to remove from Gabriel the fright he had experienced in the mine and remove the horrid, demonic malady that had plagued Lilian.

Gabriel insisted on going to Goldfire Glen. So we parted company with him to deliver the news of Talon’s passing to Talon’s master. Master Baern had been visiting when we arrived at Talon's Master's abode just outside of Goldfire Glen. Both Master Baern and Talon’s Master appeared nonplussed. For both of them, I suppose, it was the inevitable end for us all, so to see us alive must have left them befuddled, but pleased.

On seeing our distress over the loss of our friend, Master Baern offered to take us to his Grove to use the Golden Cauldron and the Silver Sickle to perform a ritual to shepherd Talon’s soul into another receptacle. We readily took him up on the offer. We would leave the following day. That evening, we dined on bean pies and blackberry juice generously provided by Talon’s Master.

Though I understand intellectually and philosophically the Celind’s belief that by disavowing oneself from all possessions, living or otherwise, one is lead to enlightenment, for Talon’s Master to show no signs of grief whatsoever at the site of his apprentice’s rendered body, troubled me. Talon, so I was lead to believe, was not just a student to the Master, but he was an adopted son to a father. How could a father be so removed to the death of his son?

I dare not judge, but the only shard of emotion I could detect from the Master’s demeanor was a brief flash of annoyance, which was swiftly shrouded by his usual stoicism. I am sure my limited comprehension of the Celind’s enigmatic ways clouded my perception.

After what amounted to a barely adequate rest, I was aroused by Lilian.

“I wish to return to Goldfire Glen.” She told me as I drearily got to my feet. “I mean to check on my brother. I would be grateful for your company.”

“And what of Talon?” I asked.

“My visit shall be brief.” She said with the slightest hint of a melancholy smile.

An hour before dawn, we left the Master’s home and journeyed in silence to Goldfire Glen. By the time the first rays of the sun were warming the cobblestone streets of the little town, we had made it to the square. Already, the streets were abuzz with early risers.

Upon seeing us, one of the villagers, a mother with several children gasped and pointed to us.

“Canaan be praised!” She shouted. I felt the gazes of dozens of faces. “Blessed be the Green! The Heroes have returned!”

Before we could react, we were surrounded. Hands reached out. Lilian and I humbly obliged. My heart swelled with joy and sorrow. What did these simple, pure people hope to find in our touch? What could I possibly provide them?

“Vat is all this about?” A harsh, grating voice rose above the crowd. Almost instantly the mood was shattered. The crowd moved back revealing a short, thin man with a long sallow face. He was flanked by two armored Justicars. His lips were turned down into a condescending scowl that eyed the cowed crowd with the indignation of a disappointed parent.

How shocked I was when I realized by his white robe and golden cross that he was a Priest of Canaan. Lilian stepped forward. The priest’s features immediately softened.

“Father Zeigfried.” She said. “How good it is to see you again.”

“Lady Lilian Evenshire.” The priest answered. “Velcome home. Gabriel eez doink much better.”

“I am pleased to hear it.” Lilian answered. “In fact, that is why I am here.”

“Ah.” The priest said, his eyes drifting over to me. His scowl returned. “Well, my Lady, he eez vaiting for you.”

Lilian nodded and turned to me.

“Would you care to join me, Evora?” She asked, sensing the sudden tension.

I looked to the people of Goldfire Glen. How the very presence of this Father Ziegfried had filled the populace with nothing short of fear. This was not Canaan’s love. This was nothing short of coercion.

My fatigue instantly vanished. I heard Canaan calling to me. I felt His glory fill me like a desert ravine after a winter shower.

I knew what I must do. This was the day. This was the moment.

“My place is here.” I told Lilian. “Give Gabriel my best. I shall be here when you are ready to return to Talon’s Master.”

Lilian nodded and left me. Father Ziegfried watched her go. He gestured and one of the Justicars broke away from him and followed her.

Father Zeigfried then turned back to the crowd.

“Gather round, guud people of Tergos!” He said, raising his voice to demand their attention. “Canaan has a message for you. For each and everyone.”

He held up his hand and stretched out his fingers.

“Bevare zee Adversary. He is but one, but he has many means to catch you and brink you into heez clutches. Like my hand has five fingers, each able to move and act on its own, but each still attached to my hand, so are zee vays of zee Adversary. Through guile. Through temptation. Through sloth, greed, vretched libation and jes, even zee seemingly innocuous, but wholly false teachings of zee Green.”

I stopped listening. He went on for quite some time. I caught references to paganism, to the “teachings of death” and the evils of “zee” Fae.

Lies. All lies. But lies told with veracity become truth in both the teller and the listener. All is drowned under the sea of zealotry, and as I panned the crowd, I could tell that many of them were barely able to tread water.

Father Zeigfreid finally finished. Two more Justicars had moved into the square. They remained as the priest was escorted back to the temple by the other Justicar.

Once they were out of sight I moved up to the very spot he stood. My whole body began to shake from nerves, but I swallowed all fear, looked up to the heavens and began.

The world bleeds
It cries out for healing

As a child, torn from its
Mother and Father
Cries out for comfort
And as a child
It does not cry for its
Father alone
Nor does it cry for its
Mother alone
A child cares not
Whether the embrace
That eases its suffering
Comes from its mother
Or its father
Its tears are dried
By love alone
Caring not that the love
Came from the father
Or the mother
Only caring
That its tears are dried
And its fears, wiped away.
Only through the loving kindness
Beget from the union of
The mother
And the father
Can true healing begin


As banally as it began, so it ended. A small crowd had gathered and listened politely, only to disperse when I had finished. Only the Justicars showed signs of having truly listened, and I could tell by the clipped turn of their heels and swift march to the temple that the words had inspired them only to indignation.

It would not be long before the heretical nature of my words were ingested and immediately spat out by Father Ziegfried.

I knew what I had done and was ready to stand judgment. I feared only the wrath of the Green and the sentence of Canaan.

Not long afterward, a woman approached me. Her features, though youthful, were etched with the lines brought about by long days under a merciless sun tending to acres of wheat. Her hair was shrouded under a sweat stained cap. She reminded me of my mother. I could not help but smile at her.

Layered with nerve she thanked me for my sermon.

“It was lovely.” She said. “It was about Canaan, yes? The Mother and the Father. He is both and one. Yes?”

“The Father is Canaan.” I answered. “The Mother is the Green.”

Her eyes flashed from repulsion to curiosity to, at last, a reluctant acceptance.

“I see.” She simply said after a long silence. “I will contemplate what you have said, Father.”

She turned and walked off. I watched her go, pleased that I had touched at least one soul. My moment of self-congratulatory bliss was cut short by Lilian’s return.

“We may go now.”

It was all she said for some time. Her whole countenance showed unusual signs of irritation. I began to ask her if she wished to talk, but she cut me short, apologizing.

“Your presence alone is enough.” She assured me. “I do not wish to discuss it at this time.”

I left it at that.

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Our journey back to Wiltangle Forest was happily dull. I kept Talon’s body in a continual state of gentle repose, but beyond that task I had little to do. Hu Li’s encapsulated body was bound to the back of a cart that was then pulled by two horses and driven by Talon’s master. Shallahai and Master Baern walked beside the slow moving cart. Lilian and I kept to the rear. Both Masters kept to themselves the majority of the time, allowing only Shallahai to gain any useful access to their counsel. All attempts to inquire of the druid what he spoke of with the Masters were rebuked.

“It remains between us and the Green.” Was all he said.

After several days of surprisingly relaxing and rejuvenating travel, our small band arrived at Master Baern’s grove in the heart of a slowly healing Wiltangle.

Master Baern performed the same ceremony on Talon’s remains that he had on Shale’s. As before, Talon’s body was consumed by the surrounding foliage in a bright green glow and after several minutes of waiting, we heard a rustle on the outskirts of the grove. A short, thin, angular figure stepped forth. He was completely naked. Before I shielded my eyes from his most personals, I caught a glimpse of his face.

It was without a doubt Talon, but at the same time, not Talon. His features were more angular and his eyes almost almond shaped. He appeared more lithe, yet more fragile than before.

His Master draped him in a thick robe the color of sun bleached grass. He instantly recognized us, but just below his usual stoicism sparked a frenetic energy I had never seen before. Lilian and I tried to speak to him, but with each question, he began to answer, only to be cut short by a sudden urge to stare at a leaf flapping playfully on the wind, or climb to the upper most branches of a tree, just because it was there.

Master Baern sensed our exasperation and smiled.

“Talon had returned as a Half-Faean creature” he explained as Talon’s Master knowingly nodded. “He is not quite human and not quite Fae.”

Afterward, Master Baern attempted to address Hu Li’s predicament. He experimented with several esoteric Green infused evocations and divinations. All failed,

"There's nothing I can do for him." Master Baern declared with some sadness. "Your friend is afflicted by an arcane spell of some potency. The caster of that magic must have been very powerful." He finished.

While it was a miracle in itself that Talon was back among the living, I couldn’t help but feel defeated.

The succubus was not vanquished and it was only by the unwilling use of a potent relic of a lost age infused with the essence of The Green that we had survived the Vrock attack at all. Why was she taking peasants and farmers to the mine? What was she looking for in there? I knew. I knew in my heart, and my mind wished it not to be so. The green worms infesting those creatures in the mine are what finally clued me in.

Allustan was right. This is about Kharas'Vhoories. Or about the appearance that Kharas'Vhoories is behind it.

The Succubus must have been looking for the Tomb of the Wind Duke General. She commanded the worm infested dead, creatures the like of which only Kharas'Vhoories knew the secret to make, or so I have read. In the guise of the merchant from Shuuth, she had taken over the General Store from Tanner's parents, who had not been seen since they sold their store. Of course, they surely died in the Cultist attack on Goldfire Glen.

Why was she in the guise of a Shuuthian merchant? Her timing was either incredibly coincidental or impeccably timed, as the priests were then due in Goldfire Glen to collect Tanner. My mind drifted to Archbishop Tagavarius’s command to me, “uncover the Adversarial plot against Canaan.”

This all smacked of an Adversarial conspiracy against Canaan, perhaps to interrupt the presence of the Voice and Will on Turgos. If Tanner were killed and the Voice and Will to die before another Exalted Child could be found Canaan's followers might be cut off from him on Turgos. Surely it would take more than that to separate Canaan from his followers, wouldn't it? Canaan is the beginning and the end. Would it be the end of all things? I just don't know. My head hurt thinking about it.

But what is Kharas'Vhoories's role in this. The long dead lich surely has no power. Someone or something is manipulating things to make it seem as though he is somehow still a threat. Right? Oh, I don't know.

One thing is however inescapably clear. We must now, once again, beseech an arcanist for assistance. Hu Li cannot remain in that block of amber forever, as much as I would wish it.

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“I release you!” Balian intoned in his characteristically shrill voice, his hand outstretched, palm forward, on the block of amber surrounding Hu Li.

The block of amber blinked out and Hu Li fell to the ground.

Balian turned away with a harrumph, walking to his easy chair in the study at his Tower.

“Hu Li!” Lilian cried, lurching forward to see if he was alright.

“Yes, my dear?” came Hu Li’s response as he opened his eyes, laying on his back with his hands folded across his chest.

“You frightened us terribly.” She helped him off of the rug. A log crackled in the fireplace.

“Yes, you should be more careful in the future, Hu Li. It could have been a deadly trap laid on that box.” I admonished the wizard.

“Well, it certainly took you long enough to remove the enchantment.” Hu Li retorted.

Balian was reading a book, “Secrets of The Great Rift.

Talon remained sitting cross-legged on the plush rug, preferring to play with a fuzzball he found rather than engage in the conversation.

Shallahai merely stared into the fire, eyes glowing white with the introspective power of The Green.

Remembering my vow of patience, I chose to ignore Hu Li’s comment.

Balian looked up from his book. “Bah! None of them had it in their power to release you, fool. You’re just lucky they had the wherewithal to contact me.”

“Yes, Master.” Hu Li bowed toward his master. “Of course. You are most kind.” He added patronizingly.

Balian scowled and was about to return to his reading, when something on Hu Li’s finger caught his eye. His eyes bulged.

“What is THAT?!” He stood straight up and pointed, arm outstretched for maximum effect, aimed at Hu Li’s ring finger.

The ring he had acquired from the troll at Brightstone Keep.

Hu Li quickly hid his hand behind his back. “N-nothing master. It is b-but a trinket.”

“Show me!” Balian commanded. And Hu Li’s hand came unbidden from behind his back as if thrust forward by some unseen force. Hu Li cried out, whining. “It’s mine!”

Balian stepped forward, staring intently at the ring then addressing Hu Li squarely in the eye, fury apparent on his brow. “Tell me, apprentice, how you came to be wearing one of the Nine Rings of Perdition?”

Shallahai turned from the fire and glared at Hu Li with white, glowing eyes.

“Which one is it?” Shallahai asked Balian.

“It is the Band of Caarcrinolaas” announced Balian. “It is a Ring of Betrayal, the most potent of the three.”

Fitting, I thought. But I bit my lip.

“Should you continue to wear this ring, you will slowly become corrupted by it until you find yourself betraying one of your friends so frightfully that your soul will be forever stained by the betrayal. Your soul will go straight to Hell when you die, where you will serve eternity in the Lake of Fire.” Balian leveled his gaze at Hu Li.

“But it’s mine!” Hu Li whined.

“How is it removed?” I asked.

“With great effort.” Balian replied.

“Can you do what must be done?” I asked the great arcanist.

“Of course.”

“Then, do it.” I said, surprising myself at the brusqueness of my tone.

Balian cocked an eyebrow at me and turned to Hu Li. Pointing at the ring, he intoned, “Resecro!

Nothing happened. He followed that intonation with another, waiving his hand over Hu Li’s hand, “Resolvo Venificus!” A bead of sweat fell from Balian’s brow.

The ring fell heavily onto the rug. Balian sighed.

Hu Li dashed for it.

Talon, who had been collecting several fuzzballs into a small pile, quickly swiped the ring up and threw it into the fire. Shallahai adjusted his stance so he was completely blocking the view to the fireplace.

Hu Li looked at the fire, then to Shallahai. Realizing defeat, he pouted and stormed off to his room.

Balian chuckled. Then he glanced at me before walking back to his easy chair.

My forehead squirmed. I fought the urge to touch it.

“Where is your friend, the one with the bum leg?” Balian asked as he once again seated himself.

“Gabriel?” Lilian asked.

“Yes, that’s it. That brawler. I miss his visits.” Balian responded.

“W-well, he didn’t want to come here. He doesn’t much care for you, Balian. Besides, he’s decided to stay in Goldfire Glen and help the village recover from its recent horrors. We left him there on the way to your tower after Master Baern reincarnated Talon.” Lilian explained. “I mean no offense.” She quickly added.

She glanced at Talon with a worried expression. He was now making three-dimensional pictures with the fuzzballs on the rug, arranging them in meticulous fashion.

“Offense?” Balian chuckled again. “None taken, my dear. If I were so easily offended, I think I might not make it out of bed in the morning. I’m not a terribly well-regarded man, you know.”

“No. I don’t know.” Lilian innocently responded.

“Well, no matter.”

“We brought you the troll blood you requested. Do you really think you can restore Gabriel’s leg?” I asked, going over to our packs to retrieve the troll’s blood. I had managed to transfer it into a large bladder. It was easier to carry that way.

“Troll’s blood? What did I want troll’s blood for?” Balian asked, confused.

“To create a ritual to restore Gabriel’s leg.” I responded, equally confused. Surely this great arcanist doesn’t have the memory of a fruit fly.

“Oh yes!” Balian exclaimed. “That’s right!” He was excited. Then in an abrupt turn around, he added flatly “I don’t know what I was thinking. I couldn’t possibly put the bugger’s leg back on if I tried. You need a priest for that.”

I just stood there in the doorway to his study holding the bladder of troll’s blood with my mouth slightly agape.

A woman’s hand gently closed my jaw as she entered the room from behind me. Her scent was intoxicating and her voice warm as a summer day.

“Now, now, Balian. You shouldn’t tease them like that. It’s not nice.” Helena purred as she gracefully entered the room and lounged on a divan near the fireplace.

“What? I’m not teasing them, I can’t do it.” Balian retorted.

Helena frowned slightly.

“When did you get here?” He asked.

“Just now.” She responded.

“But my anti-teleportation wards?” Balian said incredulously.

“You disabled them for me, remember?” Helena responded.

“Oh right! Yes, of course. I remember. Yes.” Balian said sheepishly.

Turning to me, Helena smiled. “I obtained some information that may be helpful.” She paused. “According to my sources, the Succubus that freed Veshra goes by the name Caladriel. It’s not her True Name, but it is a name she is currently using.”

“That’s great!” I exclaimed. “But what use is this information to us?” I added, doubtful.

“There’s more.” She paused again. “An arcanist summoned and bound her for the task of freeing Veshra.”

Balian’s eyebrow raised.

“It was Cranston.” She said, as if to Balian only.

“Cranston?! What on Turgos would he do THAT for?” Balian bellowed.

“I don’t know. But this Caladriel is crafty. She is apparently a spy for Dis and a frequent member of Graz’zt’s court.”

“Dis?” I asked, combing my memory. “As in Dispater?”

“Exactly. Called the Lord of Dis, the Second Hell of Perdition, His Iron Grace, and many other names, Dispater is a Lord of one of the Nine Hells of Perdition. He controls the largest city in Hell, and encourages regular trade between his city and every other place in Creation, doing all he can to invite mortals and immortals from across the Cosmos. He may seem a harmless diplomat, but he is one of the oldest devils in existence and he is thoroughly evil. He was one of the first malefircareim granted the status of Lord of Perdition by the Adversary. It is this that makes him one of the most dangerous of the Adversary’s servants.” Helena explained.

“Do you mean to suggest that Dispater is somehow involved in this?” I asked incredulously.

“I don’t suggest anything, my good Evora. I merely inform.” Helena responded. “My sources tell me many things, some true and some false. The information I give is that which I have determined, based on my dealings with these creatures, to be truth. When you deal with devils, you get lied to…a lot.” She lectured. “Do with this information what you will.”

“But Cranston lives in a place called Demonclaw, a morbid rock jutting out of the ocean a few days’ journey from Soliel. I suggest you go there and learn more from him about why he did what he did.” Helena suggested.

“That’s madness!” I exclaimed. “If he has the power to summon and bind a succubus, he would tear us apart.” I continued, cheeks flushed with anger at the suggestion that we be sent on this fool’s errand.

“You misunderstand, Evora. Cranston is not evil. At least, he didn’t seem it when last I spoke with him. I’m sure he has a good explanation for all of this.” Helena explained cheerily.

“A good explanation?” Shallahai finally spoke. “You think he might have a good explanation for why he summoned a succubus to free the companion of a long dead lich, knowing full well that the first thing that creature would do is try to resurrect her master?” Shallahai asked rhetorically.

“Well, yes.” Helena responded.

Shallahai merely stared at her.

“You do not think we would be put in danger by meeting with Cranston at Demonclaw?” Lilian asked Helena. She looked at Balian as well.

“He’s harmless.” Balian responded. Helena pointed at Balian and nodded her head encouragingly.

“Very well, then. But I think we need to find out what the succubus is doing at the Brightstone Mines. And now that Hu Li is back with us, I think we should do that forthwith. It is, after all, on the way to Soliel.” I mused aloud.

Talon stopped picking the skin off of the bottoms of his feet to look at me. “We’re going back there?” He asked.

“We must stop that Succubus.” I replied with conviction.

Talon looked at me for a moment then nodded his head in agreement.

“Yuindr, could use another drink.” Shallahai added.

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This is trolling, but its in my own storyhour thread and therefore acceptable :D

I've noticed that we are getting about 50-60 views between updates, which is many more than we used to get. I assume that means we have more interest of late in the trials and tribulations of these poor, poor PCs.

So I would like to know whether there is anything you feel is missing from this storyhour, anything you have questions about (other than unrevealed plot issues, of course), or anything you would like to see posted. I would be happy to oblige. I think someone asked about Talon's order, the Celind. I have a write up of the Celind Order, if there is any interest in reading it.

The PCs, at this point in the story, are level 6-7. This is a story hour about a current campaign. But the story is tracking well behind the campaign. In the campaign, the PCs are currently 19th level, after about a year and a half.

Some people have commented on the similarities to Sep's Tales of Wyre Campaign. I did incorporate some concepts of his, but I tweaked many of them. Some of you might recognize other similarities. For example, Orolde, Balian's gnomish servant. The name and personality are the same as that character in Sep's game. But gnomes in this campaign are very earthy and not a PC race, harder and sullen.

The religion of the dominant god is mostly the same as that in Sep's tale. The concept of the Green is the same, to the extent it has been developed thus far. But the conflict between the Green and Canaan is much more pronounced in Turgos. It is not quite like the times of Justinian -- I think that's the right Roman Emperer -- where Justinian converted to Christianity and ordered all pagans to convert or die. But it's getting close.

Unlike in Sep's story, where Eadric inadvertently creates a schism, Evora has set out to create a new religion merging the two existing belief systems, while leaving the two Powers relatively in tact. Of course, this has it's own consequences as will be discovered later in the story.

Evora is on the path of the Mystic Theurge (no levels in an arcanist class, yet). This class is called the Theurgic Mystic in Turgos. Theurgic Mystics are heretics unless officially sanctioned by the Church. Evora is not officially sanctioned, instead seeking the fast and easy route to power. This, of course, has branded him a heretic. Evora's pangs of conscience arise from the conflict between adherence to Canaanism as taught by the Curia and his own internal beliefs and faith in Canaan. Another conflict is in his desire to get the word out to all of the people about the new faith, without exposing them to persecution.

The Paladin in this story, Lilian Evenshire, has her own issues, mostly stemming from her faith and devotion to Canaan (she is a Paladin, moving into Favored Soul and Angelic Knight--I think) and her secular duty. This has not come into play yet. We are just getting into that part of the story. Another turns out to be very personal, involving her parents, which has been hinted at in the story hour.

Talon's issues revolve around his order and its antithesis, the Mordind. In the next few posts we should meet a Mordind. There's a real mind-wrecker later in the story for our poor Talon....but we'll get there in good time. Let's just say that in the current place in the campaign (not the story hour), Talon has lost all of his monk abilities....

Gabriel's issues are self-evident as they have been developed in the story hour. But hope springs eternal.

Hu Li's tragic flaws are also pretty self-evident. Surprisingly, this former PC has some staying power.

Since Shallahai's player frequents this thread, I'll let him explain Shallahai's issues and conflicts. If any of my other players are on this thread, feel free to expound on any of this.

Well, that's enough for now.
 

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