Maybe the construction of this could lead to people first thinking that only the canines from a young or adult dragon could be used and then ending up confused when you mention ancient dragons - which happened to me. But maybe that's me?
Hmm, yes.
Changing it to "a dragon of young age or older" or the like would be clearer.
Also, have no idea why I put "jaws" in that line. Where else would teeth come from?
So I'll change it to "all canine teeth from a deceased dragon of young age or olderall canine teeth from a deceased dragon of young age or older."
This could suggest that the tooth survives the event and can be used again?
"It reverts to a tooth and crumbles to dust early if it drops to 0 hit points or if you use an action to speak the command word again while touching it."?
I'd just use "It crumbles to dust early" or "it crumbles early" instead.
I suppose this all depends on how long an "Action" takes and how fast someone can move?
It's 5E, the term Action has a well defined meaning in the rules. Why do you think the monster has an "Actions" section?
Maybe also mention the "fighting to the death" thing after (earlier):
I thought it was pretty clear that the "immediate" and "trap" dragon warriors behaved differently, but if it bothers you I can add a sentence to the trap version as explication, like "This dragon warrior ignores you and your orders, and will attack if you trigger its hostility."
So it attacks the second creature but cannot sense it's presence?
"If the triggering creature flees, the warrior pursues it unerringly, sensing its direction as if it was using a locate creature spell. If another creature injures the dragon warrior, the dragon warrior views it as a new triggering creature and attacks them too, although it can only ever locate a fleeing opponent as if it was using a locate creature spell if this concerns the original triggering creature ."?
Yes, that was the intent.
Hmm… "its
locate creature ability only locates the original triggering creature."
Oh, I've also realized it doesn't need "delayed action" in the second paragraph, and I'm now thinking two/four for the planting/sowing is too low. I'd rather the user be able to push all four teeth from a standard set as one action.
I'll put the revisions in the
Dragon Warriors, but it comes to:
New Magic Item
DRAGON TOOTH
Wondrous item, rarity by dragon: very rare for gold, red and silver; rare for black, blue, brass, bronze, copper, green and white
A dragon tooth is a reptilian fang three to six inches long, small enough to fit in a pocket. They are usually found in pairs or sets of four, all canine teeth from a deceased dragon of young age or older, and their command word is often a nickname of that dragon (e.g. "Emerald Emperor Salvia" for a set of green dragon teeth). Some legendary ancient dragons have had a score or even dozens of dragon teeth harvested from their remains, but the normal limit is four per dragon.
When activated by use of its command word, the tooth becomes a living creature, a dragon warrior whose type matches the tooth's dragon (black, blue, brass, bronze, copper, gold, green, red, silver, white). A dragon tooth may be used in one of two ways: it can become a dragon warrior immediately, or it can transform into a trap that becomes a dragon warrior when triggered. See the individual dragon warrior entries for the creature's statistics.
The dragon tooth warrior exists for 1 hour. At the end of this duration, the creature reverts to its tooth form and crumbles to dust, destroying the dragon tooth. It crumbles to dust early if it drops to 0 hit points or if you use an action to speak the command word again while touching it.
To use a dragon tooth immediately, you use an action to speak the command word, crush the tooth, and then throw it to a point on the ground within 60 feet of you, where the tooth becomes a dragon warrior. If the space where the warrior would appear is occupied by other creatures or objects, or if there isn't enough space for the creature, the tooth doesn't become a dragon warrior. This dragon warrior is friendly to you and your companions and obeys your spoken commands. It speaks Common and Draconic, but the magic of the tooth allows the dragon tooth warrior to understand commands given in any of your languages. If you issue no commands, the warrior defends itself but takes no other actions.
To use a dragon tooth as a trap, you use an action to speak the command word and then plant the trap, either by laying it onto a firm and level surface within 5 feet (floor, table, etc.), pushing it into earth within 5 feet, or sowing it onto plowed soil within 60 feet. You can use one action to activate multiple dragon teeth from the same set and lay them on a surface within an adjacent 5-foot square, but planting them may require additional actions: it takes one action to push four [?] teeth into earth within an adjacent 5-foot square, or one action to sow eight [?] teeth onto plowed soil within a 60-foot cone. You can also use an action to move up to your speed and plant teeth from another location, allowing you to set dragon tooth traps at multiple positions. If you are killed or incapacitated, you will drop any trap-activated dragon teeth you have not yet planted, laying it onto a random surface within 5 feet.
Once planted, a trap dragon tooth will become a dragon warrior if it takes any damage or is stepped upon by a creature (including stepping on soil the tooth is buried under, which causes the warrior to sprout from the ground). This dragon warrior ignores you and your orders, and will attack you if its hostility is triggered. The warrior attacks the creature that triggered the trap, fighting to the death. If the triggering creature flees, the warrior pursues it unerringly, sensing its direction as if it was using a locate creature spell. If another creature injures the dragon warrior, the warrior views it as a new triggering creature to fight to the death, although its locate creature ability only locates the original triggering creature. If no triggering creature is alive, the warrior defends itself but takes no action.