Voda Vosa: Could you be a little more specific on "Cooking Stuff"? Basically, if it's listed in the PHB equipment tables and is something you intend to buy, please spell it out. Also, you now have too many skill points spent. Listen is a cross-class skill, so you've now spent 10 skill points on class skills and 8 skill points on a cross-class skill for a total of 18. You only have 16 to spend. Also note that max ranks for a cross-class skill at 1st level is 2.
Cromm10k: Sorry to hear that. Try again next time.
Jemal: I'd like to see the complete character by the end of the week please. Also, please reference the setting bible for information on religions. You mention in your post that he starts out as a Paladin, yet the character you've posted is a cleric. Am I missing something?
Ethandrew: Libris Mortis page 106. Let me know if you decide to go this route so I can provide you with the template class version.
All: For spellcasting characters who prepare their spells, please include spells typically prepared as in "If I don't specify otherwise for a given day, these are the spells my character has prepared." And once the game starts, let me know if you're going to change something out on a given day.