I plan on living forever. Or die trying.
gah! no more time! I severely underestimated the amount of work that will be waiting for me after the vacation. Now to read my esteemed opponent's work!
Can't argue with a lot of the criticism; I even thought to make sure Peter was otherwise occupied for the final battle, but I just plain forgot. A lot of the "cool stuff" the heroes get to do is social interaction (I like to get kids more opportunities to make friends than enact violence) but that's not gonna be everyone's cup of tea.
You walked the line really well -- you managed to evoke a lot without actually saying much. In it's dark, ugly, creepy way, it is a piece of lovely writing.
Bwa-ha-ha, another split decision so far. That just says these are both strong entries again.