Cedric said:heh, I'll be completely honest, I have no idea what a Rast is...<grins>
Which book is it in?
Too true. The only really misleading part was that it wasn't really a monument... just a convenient rock formation twisted to a desired end. Guilty as charged.Nifft said:Ray Silver Entry Synopsis
Ingredients:
- Kobold Sorcerer(s): 5
- Love-Struck Fool: 4
- Misleading Monument: 1
- Nature vs. Nurture: 7
- Orcus: 8
- Pernicious Advisor: 3
BONUS INGREDIENTS:
- Quicksilver: 3
- Rast Hunter: -4
- Shadow of the God: 5
- Theater of Conflict: -2
- Ultrasonic Mummy: 5
- Vengence Denied: 3
Personality: 18
Usefulness: 16
Bad Things:
Misleading Monument: there's no way you could say that it was misleading. "Inadvertantly good prediction" is the closest you could come to saying it was less than perfectly prophetic. And instead of misleading the Kobolds, it seems to have given them excellent direction!
I was trying to figure out a way to make her more wicked, but I just liked her too darn much!Pernicious Advisor: From http://www.m-w.com/ we see that pernicious means:
1 : highly injurious or destructive : DEADLY
2 archaic : WICKED
... and our very manipulative advisor, Takmarek's mother, is neither of these things. She doesn't have his interests at heart, it's true, but neither does she desire his destruction or injury.
With that I shall counter with my closing comments on my entry.Rast Hunter: Rasts have an Int score of 3. They're not prime hunter material. Not only that, but they don't seem to have hands -- so I can't picture one using any kind of sword. Bleah.
So it's a special rast.The rast hunter is a rast with an intelligence of 12 and five levels of fighter.
Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing it.The rest was pretty good. I like the idea of a LN Kobold savior, and I like how he's done.
-- Nifft