OOC: Adventure Path - Shackled City

[Krago o'the Mountain]

Galen Thurycides

Mark Chance:

For Galen's sheet, I saw the following:

1. Need an age

2. He has one left over skill point to use.

3. Need a 'default' list of prepared spells.

4. Biggest issue: He can't take Weapon Focus (Ranged Spell) as a feat, because he lacks the prerequisite +1 BAB.

Please revise and let me know.....

Thanks!
Krago

 

[Krug]

Krug:

For Eliara's sheet, I noticed the following:

1. Her ability scores add up to a 30 point buy, not 28. This is based on the wood elf's ability modifiers of +2 STR, +2 DEX, -2 CON, -2 INT, so let me know if you agree/disagree.

2. She can have two more known languages for her INT bonus.

3. I figured final wealth as 31 gp, 8 sp (because her starting Traveller's Outfit is free).

That's it, everything else looked good (pending a correction of ability scores).

Please submit a revised character sheet for final approval.

Thanks!
Krago

Just a quick check though, this is the breakdown for ability scores:

Str: 12+2=14 (4)
Dex: 14+2=16 (6)
Con: 12-2=10 (4)
Int: 16-2=14 (6)
Wis: 12 (4)
Cha: 12 (4)

28 points. Would this be correct?

 

[Krago o'the Mountain]

Just a quick check though, this is the breakdown for ability scores:

Str: 12+2=14 (4)
Dex: 14+2=16 (6)
Con: 12-2=10 (4)
Int: 16-2=14 (6)
Wis: 12 (4)
Cha: 12 (4)

28 points. Would this be correct?

It's not, because the point cost gets proportionately greater for higher ability scores. A 16 score actually costs 10 points, not 6. So, your example above is in fact a 32 point buy. Your original character sheet is a 30 point buy because it has her WIS score at 10.

Here's the full breakdown:

8 = 0 pts
9 = 1 pt
10 = 2 pts
11 = 3 pts
12 = 4 pts
13 = 5 pts
14 = 6 pts
15 = 8 pts
16 = 10 pts
17 = 13 pts
18 = 16 pts

I hope that helps!

Thanks,
Krago

 

[Krago o'the Mountain]

Konstantine D'Artur

Dichotomy:

I can't find much to quibble about for Konstantine's sheet.

I did come up with a slightly different final wealth total: 13gp, 4sp, 9cp. So, you might want to double check that.

Also, I thought I'd point out that her move score will be 20' because she's carrying a medium load.

That's it for her! Good job.

Thanks,
Krago

 

[Krago o'the Mountain]

Intari/Seven Deadly Stings

Caliber:

Just a couple things for Intari's character sheet:

1. He still has 4 more skill points to use.

2. His speed is 20' because he carries a medium load.

3. I didn't see a final wealth total listed on his sheet. Is that intentional? (It would fit the flavor the character well)

4. It would help me if you could include a summary of the Sunstroke spell (I don't own Sandstorm...yet).

That's all I can see. Take a look at these small revisions, and let me know...

Thanks,
Krago

 

[Krug]

Oops ok. Have made the changes, exchanged Studded Leather for Leather and making up the amount to purchase a Longbow. Boy those bows are expensive.

 

[Krago o'the Mountain]

Oops ok. Have made the changes, exchanged Studded Leather for Leather and making up the amount to purchase a Longbow. Boy those bows are expensive.

Okay, Eliara looks good now! I figured her remaining money at 1gp, 8sp. Her starting traveller's outfit is free.

She's ready to go to the Rogue's Gallery....just as soon as I create one, that is.

Thanks,
Krago

 

[Krago o'the Mountain]

Krug,

Actually, I spoke too soon. Since you adjusted Eliara's INT score, she lost one modifier point. So, she now has one too many languages, and 4 too many skill points.

Please revise once more.

Thanks,
Krago

 

[Mark Chance]

1. Need an age: 18

2. He has one left over skill point to use: D'oh!

3. Need a 'default' list of prepared spells: Warmages don't prepare spells.

4. Biggest issue: He can't take Weapon Focus (Ranged Spell) as a feat, because he lacks the prerequisite +1 BAB: D'oh! I must've been thinking "hexblade."

I'll get back to you on the skill point and feat. It's late, and I'm tired.

 

[Krug]

Krug,

Actually, I spoke too soon. Since you adjusted Eliara's INT score, she lost one modifier point. So, she now has one too many languages, and 4 too many skill points.

Please revise once more.

Thanks,
Krago

Oops. I adjusted the skills points though. (8+1(INT))*4=36 is that correct?