Scales of War #1 Rescue at Rivenroar (Full)

[RavenBlackthorne]

I'm unsure about the face now! Opinions? Maybe somewhere between the two? The feet are lovely and the crystal and the static (I envision the "warp" around him growing with level, you see?). I'm not sure what age Viator comes across as in human years.

 

[Goonalan]

I'm unsure about the face now! Opinions? Maybe somewhere between the two? The feet are lovely and the crystal and the static (I envision the "warp" around him growing with level, you see?). I'm not sure what age Viator comes across as in human years.

I think you should start young, and possibly get older- more worn, or wise, or darker, or... somehow affected. But start naive, hopeful et al.

The thing about Freggo's picture I like is you can see the hope and optimism in his face, or else naivity, I do hope Goekn comes back- I really would like to see his PC get older, more experienced.

The same in a sense for Viator. In the picture he's light, happy-ish and a bit cocky (sure of himself), like when he had a go at Eoffram Troyas for impugning his honour. Right now he thinks honour (or whatever it is he calls it) is important. While there's the nervous, worried side to him mostly to the fore is the fact that he is young, and full of life. I get that he doesn't know how beautiful he is- hence his nervous chat with the bar maid back in the Nentir Inn. But some of the time- especially in the combat he's certain of himself and his powers- except for for he seems to have the worst dice at times.

I like him as he is- I think the distance he travels will be etched on his face. More so than the build up of static that surrounds him.

Cheers PDR

 

[RavenBlackthorne]

You have just summed it up perfectly. I defer to your opinion entirely. Go with it.

 

[Thanee]

Definitely an improvement!

Magnus face is a lot better now. Kali's too.

Maybe Viator should have the eyes more like in the first picture, keeping his face so young as it is now, though?

I also like how Velani turned out in the second picture.

Bye
Thanee

 

[larryfinnjr]

As for Velani - love the armor mods and the sword - certainly beefier. And the reshaping of the armor I think gives her the faint female figure without being too Warcraft. Love it.

Thee things I would still like to request: her nose is still too big. I'm not sure how to do it (I'm FAR from artistic), but her face overall is still boyish. I know that's largelly due to her hair, but maybe she could have a slight smile instead? Also, her legs/feet are still too thick, IMHO, too manly. If they could just be thinned somewhat, that would add a bit of femininity. Lastly (this is new) - could she have a sheathed widow's blade dagger on her opposite hip?

Thanks for all the effort!

 

[Goonalan]

As for Velani - love the armor mods and the sword - certainly beefier. And the reshaping of the armor I think gives her the faint female figure without being too Warcraft. Love it.

Thee things I would still like to request: her nose is still too big. I'm not sure how to do it (I'm FAR from artistic), but her face overall is still boyish. I know that's largelly due to her hair, but maybe she could have a slight smile instead? Also, her legs/feet are still too thick, IMHO, too manly. If they could just be thinned somewhat, that would add a bit of femininity. Lastly (this is new) - could she have a sheathed widow's blade dagger on her opposite hip?

Thanks for all the effort!

New instructions sent through.

 

[Goonalan]

The guy doing the art asks-

Do you know what he means by a 'widow's blade' dagger? It's not a classification I'm familiar with. It's important to note that any distinctive blade shape is likely to be obscured by the sheathe, but a picture or full description would be very handy.

[MENTION=99210]larryfinnjr[/MENTION]

I've googled it but can't find it.

 

[larryfinnjr]

Sorry, it's technically called a Widow's Knife.

Widow’s knife: Named for a similar-looking harvesting tool used in the verdant belts, this weapon has a wide blade on one end of a wood or an ivory handle. Hidden within the handle are two spring-loaded prongs.

Image of Widow's Knife

 

[Goonalan]

Velani

third pass

Over to you [MENTION=99210]larryfinnjr[/MENTION]

 

[tiornys]

Apparently, I should stick to rolling dice for myself, and stop rolling for other people. At least, that's what the last 7 d20 rolls I've made suggest....

t~

edit: and I like that third pass