So here is my PC, mostly done, for review.
Rorik
Fighter 1
		
		
	
	
Background 
Features 
LN
Human (Variant)
Increase two ability scores by one (STR, INT)
Gain 1 feat: Magic initiate
Gain 1 skill: Athletics
Languages: Common and one extra
Fighter
HD: 1d10 HP:12
Armour Proficiencies: All Armour, Shields
Weapon Proficiencies: Simple, Martial
Saves: STR, CON
Skills: Insight; Perception
1 - fighting style: Great Weapon Fighting
1 - Second Wind
Spell:
0th: Frostbite, Greenflame Blade
1st: Absorb Elements
Soldier
Skills: Athletics; Itimidation
Tools: Dragon Chess, Vehicles (land)
Language
Feature: Military Rank
Abilities and saves 
ABILITIES (mod/save)
STR*: 16 (+3/+5)
DEX: 10 (0/0)
CON*:14(+2/+4)
INT:14(+2/+2)
WIS:10(0/0)
CHA: 10(0/0)
AC: 16
Initiative: 0
Proficiency bonus: +2
Offense:
Greatsword: +7 5ft 2d6S (Heavy, 2 handed)
Shortsword: +7 5ft 1d6P (Finesse, Light)
Spell Save DC: 12
SKILLS:
*Athletics: +5
Acrobatics: 0
Sleight of Hand: 0
Stealth: 0
Arcana: +2
History: +2
Investigation: +2
Nature: +2
Religion: +2
Animal Handling: 0
Insight: +2
Medicine: 0
Perception: +2
Survival: 0
Deception: 0
*Intimidation: +2
Performance: 0
Persuasion: +0
Passive Perception: 8
Equipment 
Chain Mail
Greatsword
Shortsword
Light Cross bow
Explorers Pack (Backpack, Bedroll, Mess kit, Tinderbox, Torches (10), Rations (10), Waterskin, 50ft hemp rope)
rank insignia
Trophy
Clothes
Belt pouch
PP GP EP SP CP
0 10 0 0 0
description 
DESCRIPTION
Rorik is in his late 20s with just the first signs of grey creeping into his hair.  He is a huge man, towering over most other men, with a broad, muscular build from years of sword practice.  He is generally friendly and open with people, but can quickly turn to aggression when threatened, not easily letting go of insults to him and his.
TRAITS
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