Sialia said:Nailed it again, Bard! Much more of that sort of thing and I'll leave writing the prose entirely up to you. Many thanks, and apologies for working on such a dark series at a time when it sounds like you could use a lift instead.
I will work on something cheery just for you if I get a moment in the days ahead.
Hoping the New Year will bring you much goodness,
Sialia
Sialia said:Nailed it again, Bard! Much more of that sort of thing and I'll leave writing the prose entirely up to you.
Some endings are beginnings, and some beginnings are endings.BardStephenFox said:Sialia,
Commencement - This is heavy. When I glance at it, it is bright and colorful. When I stop and look at it, I am overwhelmed by my brain's attempts to make sense of it. This is because my initial reaction is to flinch at the seeming anger and violence and then my brain starts to look for a different impression, but I can't find it. I think I can pinpoint what it is that strikes me as violent, but I will hold off on mentioning it for now. Perhaps this is the impression you are shooting for and I don't need to explain it? But, if you want to know, I can certainly point it out.