Sialia,
Commencement - This is heavy. When I glance at it, it is bright and colorful. When I stop and look at it, I am overwhelmed by my brain's attempts to make sense of it. This is because my initial reaction is to flinch at the seeming anger and violence and then my brain starts to look for a different impression, but I can't find it. I think I can pinpoint what it is that strikes me as violent, but I will hold off on mentioning it for now. Perhaps this is the impression you are shooting for and I don't need to explain it? But, if you want to know, I can certainly point it out.