@Most seem alright, only detail I can see is Strength 12 is listed as giving a +2 modifier in the beginning though it's corrected later throughout.
Just one detail though: You seem to mix grammatical tense (it's called that in English right?) in your appearance section. Like was a fair elf (imperfect) and has a bounce to her steps (presens). Sorry for being grammatopolice, just wanted to point it out as it striked me as odd XD
Noticed the str thing too, will edit.
And yeah, I always mix those tenses. Drives my english teachers nuts, since it's just about the only error I made on papers.