Mantle of Inspiration is downright unnerving, and not in a good way. More of a stalker-ish vibe, or should I say stalk-ee?
I'd broaden them to Passion and Creation, because there are relatively few domains this edition compared to third that making their spheres bigger could be good.
So Passion would include Gods of Love, Lust, Rage, Hate, Pleasure, Pain, ect...
Creation would include Gods of the Forge, Weaving, Carving, ect...
Yep, this is fairly close to my assessment as well. They feel both overly complicated and half-assed.These two colleges don't quite feel right. The themes are good. A fey powered bard with frightening supernatural charm and an intrigue focused bard with secret manipulation powers. Both are dark and interesting.
But the powers themselves are strangely complex and specific. And both subclasses have low level combat abilities that barely match their theme.
Also, the College of Whispers doesn't seem to have a consistent source of where the supernatural powers come from. At one point it's poison damage. Then magical coercion. Then literally stealing someone's shadow. I don't see any cohesiveness to the story here.
It's a good start, but these ones need work.