Ceramic DM autumn '03(final judegment: new ceramic dm champ!)
cool hand luke
First Post
word count
Macbeth's entry = 3031 words
Cool hand Luke's = 2098.
Make sure you heavily weight those extra 33 words that Macbeth had to use in making his vastly inferior story.
Macbeth's entry = 3031 words
Cool hand Luke's = 2098.
Make sure you heavily weight those extra 33 words that Macbeth had to use in making his vastly inferior story.
alsih2o
First Post
Nitesse vs Sparky
Maldur-
Nitesse: the arogance of of the high level mage is amazing. A ruthless series of spells, and the comment on resurection, Very nice.
Sparky: A strange tale of monks, dragons and incomprehensable rites. I just love the idea of a dragon hiding from a crowd, within the robes of a monk.
I say Sparky for this one!
Speaker-
NiTessine presents one very nasty end to one deserving assassin. The use to
which the pictures were put is very well done. I like the idea that the
mage cares not for the dead girl because 'She could always be resurrected.'
Sounds like a PC or two I've known.
Sparky's world is one I find very interesting. His use of language feels
right and proper, and the dialogue between characters clear and realistic.
I particularly liked his use of the mud and eye images.
Sparky has my vote.
Alsih2o-
nit presents us with a different view of the pit particularly and i like that. the pictures say soemthing to everyone, i am usually interested in what else they are saying. nit always does this well. very caught up in one series of actions though. it seems an encounter more than an adventure or story.
sparky starts odd and finishes with it too. i like the "feel" of this one.
unfortunately nit always shows up and does well, against someone who does really well.
i vote for sparky.
unanimous decision in sparkys favor. 3-0
Maldur-
Nitesse: the arogance of of the high level mage is amazing. A ruthless series of spells, and the comment on resurection, Very nice.
Sparky: A strange tale of monks, dragons and incomprehensable rites. I just love the idea of a dragon hiding from a crowd, within the robes of a monk.
I say Sparky for this one!
Speaker-
NiTessine presents one very nasty end to one deserving assassin. The use to
which the pictures were put is very well done. I like the idea that the
mage cares not for the dead girl because 'She could always be resurrected.'
Sounds like a PC or two I've known.
Sparky's world is one I find very interesting. His use of language feels
right and proper, and the dialogue between characters clear and realistic.
I particularly liked his use of the mud and eye images.
Sparky has my vote.
Alsih2o-
nit presents us with a different view of the pit particularly and i like that. the pictures say soemthing to everyone, i am usually interested in what else they are saying. nit always does this well. very caught up in one series of actions though. it seems an encounter more than an adventure or story.
sparky starts odd and finishes with it too. i like the "feel" of this one.
unfortunately nit always shows up and does well, against someone who does really well.
i vote for sparky.
unanimous decision in sparkys favor. 3-0
Macbeth
First Post
Ummmm.. I hope that having a long entry won't count against me in this round, since no length was stated. I would be happy to write a shorter entry in the next round (assuming I will make it), but I just think that without a stated length having a long entry shouldn't sount against me.
cool hand luke
First Post
WRONG MACBETH!!!!
being so incredibly over long should definitely hurt you, SHould dang near disqualify you outright.
what is the eta of our judgement?
being so incredibly over long should definitely hurt you, SHould dang near disqualify you outright.
what is the eta of our judgement?
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