Hey UK
some questions and suggestions still left about the abilties.
Epic Feats:
No. 78: Requires only a skill check to steal them? Any DC? Does the character have to touch the 2-dimensions?
No. 80: Still missing text at the end...
No. 101: Still missing text after Normal:
Divine Abilities:
No. 71: two times No. 71, first one is Improved Power Attack but with text of Inspire Wildshape
No. 112: "You exist one round in the future"? Thought it is "you can see one round into the future". But anyways nice to have it now ^^
No. 143: Still not finished
No. 149: See above
No. 151: See above
No. 154: What is the deal with this one? You have Superior PA (which gives 2 dmg for 1 BAB), who ever should take this one (which gives 2 dmg for 2 BAB)? And what feat is "Great Power Attack" which you've mentioned in the prerequisites? Never heard of it.
Cosmic Abilties:
No. 6: pretty obvious, but a detailed benefit would be nice ^^
No. 10: describing text refers to No. 6, and a more detailed effect would be nice
No. 13: Architect is spelled wrong
No. 14: no benefit detailed
No. 16: see above
No. 17: any save?
No. 19 - 21: no benefit detailed
No. 23: see above
No. 25: a more detailed effect would be nice
No. 26: no benefit detailed
No. 27: what are the effects of the benefit?
No. 20: Exclusivity: number isn't right and no benefit detailed
No. 32: no benefit detailed
you jump from 32 to 45
No. 45: a more detailed effect would be nice
you jump from 45 to 56
No. 49: no benefit detailed
No. 53: see above
No. 60 - 64: see above
No. 72: a more detailed effect would be nice
No. 73: see above
No. 74: no benefit detailed
No. 77 - 78: see above
No. 90: see above
No. 95: see above
No. 97 - 98: see above
Transcendental Abilities:
No. 7: no benefit detailed
No. 20: see above
No: 22: a more detailed effect would be nice
No. 25: no benefit detailed
No 26: text of benfit missing
No. 27: no benefit detailed
No. 31: see above
No. 37: see above
No. 41 - 44: see above
No. 45: a more detailed effect would be nice
No. 46 - 48: no benefit detailed
Omnific Abilities:
No. 8: a more detailed effect would be nice
No. 11: no benefit detailed
No. 18: see above
I'm afraid mate, chapter 4 is way from finished. Hope this helps you, keep up the good work.