RG updated, this should be final version
Tglassy, not everything needs to be optimal, as long as it fits the story.
I generally avoid (one could say even hate) "the great six" logic for the items in 3.5 / PF - usually, I sacrifice some numeric advantage for better story or coherence
Looks good. Took me a little reading to find everything I was trying to gather (languages and such), but your PC looks good. Lumrolur is approved
Thanks for writing up your gear using my Item Slot Encumbrance house rules. Really appreciated.
I'm estimating the Monster Hunter Pack as counting for 7 slots of packed items...
Chest (2 slots) + Crowbar (1 slot) + Hammer (1 slot) + 3 Wooden Stakes & 3 Torches & Flask of Holy Water & Flask of Oil is eight "bundle type" items (1-2 slots, I'll round down to 1) + Manacles (1 slot) + Flask of Oil (1 slot) + Tinderbox and Holy Symbol and Steel Mirror (all are 0 slots) = 7 slots
...plus Cold Weather Clothes (1 slot), that's 8 slots, which is (2 slots) over your Strength of 6, so Lumrolur will be a bit encumbered (-10 feet speed) unless he gets some help like a strong ally or an ally casting
Tenser's Floating Disk, or a pack mule or sled dogs, etc.
edit: sorry I made a mistake in maths! still same result of being encumbered, but just wanted to correct it.
edit edit: Just caught your PM. Yes! If you give up the chest to offset cost of Hand Crossbow, that's fine, and that will also bring you down to 6 of 6 packed item slots, preventing you from being encumbered. So all around good move.