Ltheb Silverfrond
Explorer
U_K!
I just finished looking over the new update. The Portfolio section is looking good.
As usual, a few questions/nitpicks:
With the omnific power that gives you every portfolio, is that equal to having the "single" version of each portfolio or the "double" version?
Within some of the [Effect] descriptions you list effects being tied to 1/4 a deitiy's HD. This can get confusing if you try to cross reference it with the table. (Especially with Rusting Effect, and thelemic effect)
With Thelemic Effect, the way it is written, it seems like it gets weaker if I take it multiple times. (Now the "hand effect" hits multiples of 16, which hit less opponents) Also, perhaps this should allow a save? You have this neat Dominance power, and it doesnt seem like it applies to too much. (Divine aura and Atomic effect are the only ones that come to mind, asside from spells and class features)
Atomic Effect is really confusing as to how much of what effect is being used. Its possible to figure out, but It might be best to list it out in a table or something. (Ex: 1d4 Force damage per X HD, Ability score damage to Str, Dex, Con per X HD, etc)
Spelling out Digestio makes it even better.
The new use for Alter reality is cool.
Listing effects as "200% more" is misleading; It might be more accurate to say either "300% normal" or "Triple normal". (For such things as superior summoning and a few of the Porfolios)
Some of the divinity templates have built in powers that don't match the written text of a power in the powers section. (Like the dimentional powers) (Though you probably are going to update all those after the powers section is over and done with, right?)
And my last nitpick: Temporal effects. Especially Transtemporal. It says that beings with Slipstream can't get "Owned" by this power, but what kind of "Own-age" does this power dish out? Does it mean I can essentially go back in time and roundhouse kick my foes' relatives if he or she doesn't have slipstream? (Basically anyone without Slipstream versus a being with Transtemporal instantly dies/doesnt exist?)
Asside from my random nitpicks, I didn't see too many typos. (I'll wait to list 'em in case someone else is throwing together a list)
I just finished looking over the new update. The Portfolio section is looking good.
As usual, a few questions/nitpicks:
With the omnific power that gives you every portfolio, is that equal to having the "single" version of each portfolio or the "double" version?
Within some of the [Effect] descriptions you list effects being tied to 1/4 a deitiy's HD. This can get confusing if you try to cross reference it with the table. (Especially with Rusting Effect, and thelemic effect)
With Thelemic Effect, the way it is written, it seems like it gets weaker if I take it multiple times. (Now the "hand effect" hits multiples of 16, which hit less opponents) Also, perhaps this should allow a save? You have this neat Dominance power, and it doesnt seem like it applies to too much. (Divine aura and Atomic effect are the only ones that come to mind, asside from spells and class features)
Atomic Effect is really confusing as to how much of what effect is being used. Its possible to figure out, but It might be best to list it out in a table or something. (Ex: 1d4 Force damage per X HD, Ability score damage to Str, Dex, Con per X HD, etc)
Spelling out Digestio makes it even better.
The new use for Alter reality is cool.
Listing effects as "200% more" is misleading; It might be more accurate to say either "300% normal" or "Triple normal". (For such things as superior summoning and a few of the Porfolios)
Some of the divinity templates have built in powers that don't match the written text of a power in the powers section. (Like the dimentional powers) (Though you probably are going to update all those after the powers section is over and done with, right?)
And my last nitpick: Temporal effects. Especially Transtemporal. It says that beings with Slipstream can't get "Owned" by this power, but what kind of "Own-age" does this power dish out? Does it mean I can essentially go back in time and roundhouse kick my foes' relatives if he or she doesn't have slipstream? (Basically anyone without Slipstream versus a being with Transtemporal instantly dies/doesnt exist?)
Asside from my random nitpicks, I didn't see too many typos. (I'll wait to list 'em in case someone else is throwing together a list)
