Good character build, HolyMan. I will offer the observation that Rathan has already submitted a Human Cleric, however. I really, really enjoy your character's background, though. Would it be possible, maybe, to reevaluate Sevren as a Paladin or an Avenger, for the sake of party composition? If this notion offends you, don't worry about it. Two leaders wouldn't be such a bad thing, but at this point, it seems that we're sorely lacking a Defender.
And to Rathan, thanks for the encouragement. I've got the first act mostly engineered and ready to go, and I'm excited to get the ball rolling.
EDIT: Also, sharp observation, Rathan. According to the PHB, Clerics don't start out with shield proficiency. However, Inspiring Word is acquired by taking the Student of Battle Multiclass feat, which grants that power as a daily.