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Metliz Reviewed Again
You don't have any bolts listed for your crossbow. Some waterskins would be rather important to carry around. Another trail ration and some fishing hooks could be slightly helpful for spending the last of the silver.
Also, note that although you are not proficient in armor, you could still wear some if you wanted. There's no samurai culture in the new world to make it taboo for a shugenja to wear armor. Leather armor has no armor check penalty, is only 10 gold pieces, weighs 15 pounds, and wouldn't interfere with your divine spells. Although it would put you at medium weight carried, you could easily remove your backpack in combat to fix that and avoid being slowed down by it. Similarly, a tent might be handy for keeping you dry, but it's heavy so it would result in a medium load.
Your weights listed are off in a few places. A quarterstaff weighs 4 pounds. A light crossbow also weighs 4 pounds. A scroll case is one-half pound. So your current weight is 48-1/2 pounds.
Only things that weren't fixed here were that one of her 14 scores should be a 15 (either Str or Wis), her crossbow range increment should be 80 feet, and she needs a specific Shugenja School chosen with her Elemental Focus. The choices for Air Shugenja are the Asahina School or the Soshi School. Your spell selection below looks like it uses the Soshi School, so note that next to your Element Focus.Well, here's Metliz again. Hope this time she's fine!
Code:Name: Metliz Class: Shugenja Race: Human Size: Medium Gender: Female Alignment: Chaotic good Spirits of nature: Air Str: 14 +2 Level: 1 XP: 0 Dex: 18 +4 BAB: +0 HP: 10 (1d6+4) Con: 18 +4 Grapple: +2 Dmg Red: 0 Int: 12 +1 Speed: 30' Spell Res: 0 Wis: 14 +2 Init: +4 Spell Save: +4 Cha: 18 +4 ACP: 0 Spell Fail: 0% Base Armor Shld Dex Size Nat Misc Total Armor: 10 +0 +0 +4 +0 +0 +0 14 Touch: 14 Flatfooted: 10 Base Mod Misc Total Fort: 0 +4 +4 Ref: 0 +4 +4 Will: 2 +2 +4 Weapon Attack Damage Critical Quartefstaff +2 1d6+3 20x2 Light crosbow(50f) +4 1d8 19-20x2 Sling (50f) +4 1d4 20x2 Languages: Comon, Elven Class: Sense Elements 3 Elemental Focus: Air Feats: Point blank shot, Combat casting.
An inkpen costs 1 silver piece (though ink is 8 gp as you listed). Paper costs 4 silver per page, so 10 pages is 4 gold pieces, not 2. After those changes are made, you still have 25 gold and 9 silver left to spend. You also need to add a set of clothes to the list of equipment.Voda Vosa said:Code:Skill Points: 24 Max Ranks: Skills Ranks Mod Misc Total Concentration 4 +4 +8 Diplomacy 4 +4 +8 Craft(alchemy) 4 +1 +5 Heal 4 +2 +6 Knowledge (Religion) 4 +1 +5 Spellcraft 4 +1 +5 Equipment: Cost Weight Sacred ofuda 15gp 3lb Spell component pouch 5gp 2lb Light Crosbow 35gp 3lb Quarterstaff 1lb Sling - - Flint and steel 1gp - Backpack 2gp 2lb Bedroll 1sp 5lb Fishook 1sp - Rope, Hemp 1gp 10lb Sling bullets (30) 3sp 15lb Ration, Trail(3 day) 15sp 3lb Scroll case 1gp - inkpen and a vial of ink 8gp Scroll paper x10 2gp Weight 44lb light: 58, medium: 59-116, heavy: 117-175
You don't have any bolts listed for your crossbow. Some waterskins would be rather important to carry around. Another trail ration and some fishing hooks could be slightly helpful for spending the last of the silver.
Also, note that although you are not proficient in armor, you could still wear some if you wanted. There's no samurai culture in the new world to make it taboo for a shugenja to wear armor. Leather armor has no armor check penalty, is only 10 gold pieces, weighs 15 pounds, and wouldn't interfere with your divine spells. Although it would put you at medium weight carried, you could easily remove your backpack in combat to fix that and avoid being slowed down by it. Similarly, a tent might be handy for keeping you dry, but it's heavy so it would result in a medium load.
Your weights listed are off in a few places. A quarterstaff weighs 4 pounds. A light crossbow also weighs 4 pounds. A scroll case is one-half pound. So your current weight is 48-1/2 pounds.
Only rules errors here are that the 0-level Soshi school spell is Daze, not Stun (in English anyway, dunno if there's any difference in Spanish), and that you cannot have the Resistance spell, due to that being an Earth spell and you being an Air Shugenja. So replace that spell.Voda Vosa said:Code:Spell DC: 4 (Cha) + Spell Level +10 base +1(conditional; Air) Shugenjas Spells: Level 0: (5/day) Cure Minor Wounds Stun Resistance Detect magic Ghostly sounds Level 1: (4/day) Disguise self Burning hands Sleep Age: 19 Height: 1.8 meters Weight: 60 kg Eyes: Green Hair: Blond Skin: Tanned
Metliz is a cheerful person, she loves walking under the sunlight
and running in the forests, he uses her hair wild, no quite clean,
but any defect she have, vanish when her shiny smile apears in her
face.