Whew. I kept trying to find ways to keep that short while telling the whole story I wanted to tell. I think I'll just split it up over a few posts and go on to Tommi next, so as not to do too much for one player at once. I like the writing (forcing myself to take the time to write is one of the reasons I'm running these games) but I don't want to spend TOO much time at it. (I probably spend more than enough time running these games as it is!) I hope you like the story. I tend to write these without looking back (one pass, very little editing) so I don't always know if everything works out.